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Chapter 8
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Nice, it's done, I'll read it now! ^^
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Chapter 9
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Two more really good chapters.

Man, the pacing has picked up, compared to the original Bourbon arc—you've already introduced Amuro and Sera. I'd say you've addressed the major complaint with this arc—I don't think it would be disliked so if it was a faster arc.
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Thanks, DC!
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I've really hit a brick wall in terms of the story. Meitantei usually helps me out, but he's currently MIA. Would any of you be willing to help me with the mystery in the latest case. PM me if you would like to.
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Chapter 10 is finally up! Thanks so much, DCUA!
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Interesting to see my suggestions towards the end of the chapter... first time I've actually had input towards something like this.

Looking forward to the next one!
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Thanks!
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Chapter 11 May be the last one.
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Nicely done!
unclesporkums wrote:Chapter 11 May be the last one.
How come?
“Life is infinitely stranger than anything which the mind of man could invent. We would not dare to conceive the things which are really mere commonplaces of existence. If we could fly out of that window hand in hand, hover over this great city, gently remove the roofs, and and peep in at the queer things which are going on, the strange coincidences, the plannings, the cross-purposes, the wonderful chains of events, working through generations, and leading to the most outre results, it would make all fiction with its conventionalities and foreseen conclusions most stale and unprofitable.”
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Because I'm sick of working my body and mind on a story that only one or two people pay any semblance of attention to.
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Aww, I really like this fanfiction so far.
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I like it too. I was really enjoying it.
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unclesporkums wrote:Because I'm sick of working my body and mind on a story that only one or two people pay any semblance of attention to.
Just wondering—how many would be enough for you to keep going?

Because 398 people have looked at chapter 9 at deviantart, and for chapters 1-10, the view count never dipped below 100. Today, alone, 21 people have looked at chapter 11, and I'm sure it'll rise. Have you been looking at these view counts? Your attitude seems to indicate otherwise.
“Life is infinitely stranger than anything which the mind of man could invent. We would not dare to conceive the things which are really mere commonplaces of existence. If we could fly out of that window hand in hand, hover over this great city, gently remove the roofs, and and peep in at the queer things which are going on, the strange coincidences, the plannings, the cross-purposes, the wonderful chains of events, working through generations, and leading to the most outre results, it would make all fiction with its conventionalities and foreseen conclusions most stale and unprofitable.”
“Education never ends... it is a series of lessons, with the greatest for the last.”
― Arthur Conan Doyle, The Complete Adventures of Sherlock Holmes and His Last Bow
"I have decided to stick to love... hate is too great a burden to bear."
— Martin Luther King Jr. (A Testament of Hope: The Essential Writings and Speeches of Martin Luther King, Jr)
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