(Taken) Plotbunny for action/adventure fanfic, Conan-Ai cent

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(Taken) Plotbunny for action/adventure fanfic, Conan-Ai cent

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EDIT: This plunny has been adopted by mizukithepanda http://mizukithepanda.livejournal.com/< Now this story belongs to her.


I have a plotbunny, it makes me excited and I wanna write it. But I lack ideas ( and time) to make it good . Here's how it goes.

The Japanese authorities discover that Conan and Haibara are children without identity. They have no birth certificates or any papers to tell who they are. Thus they are taken away from the Mori's and Agasa to an orphanage, but things are not what they seem. Their transporter, a man who is supposed to work for the police, drugs them and gives them to a familiar face...Okiya Subaru (aka Bourbon).

They are taken far away from Japan, somewhere in the Russian mountains, where they enter a training program for children with a high level of endurance. The kind of kids that don't fear the sight of a dead body because they've seen much worse. The goal is to make them perfect young agents, for the Black Organization.

Conan and Haibara learn they were discovered by chance. The Black Organisation assign Okiya Subaru to search for children involved in traumatic events, such as murder. The two shrunken teenagers appear in every picture behind Detective Mori, completely unaffected by the bloody murder scenes. So they are watched, and Okiya becomes assured that they are more than what the Organization needs for agents. Other children in the training program are equally consistent, but they are not grown-ups in reality.

That's what I've come up with. I'm putting it up here, hoping that a fan this genre would take it. The reason I moved the setting to Russia is because crime and chaos is easier to take place in such a country, unlike Japan or the US for example. And I also want Haibara and Conan to have a dangerous, wild adventure for themselves where their relationship is tested and stretched to the limit. I absolutely adore the interaction between them.
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hey!that's a good idea!!!
i can't wait for that fanfic!
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How about changing the area into an secret underground labor in some mountain in japan?
Then you could bring in Agasa, Heiji, Kogoro and Ran and the DBs too, like they are searching for them.
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I love, love, love this idea! If you end up making this fanfiction really good, then I'll support and read it!
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Just a thought. If you going to add work camps then why not change the time frame to Bridge on the River Kwai building in 1943?
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sstimson wrote: Just a thought. If you going to add work camps then why not change the time frame to Bridge on the River Kwai building in 1943?
I have no idea what you're referring to. Honestly.
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Shinran wrote: I love, love, love this idea! If you end up making this fanfiction really good, then I'll support and read it!
Thank you guys. The only problem is that I don't have a writing talent. I was hoping someone could actually make it really good and entertaining so that we all have fun. :)
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HayleyStark wrote:
sstimson wrote: Just a thought. If you going to add work camps then why not change the time frame to Bridge on the River Kwai building in 1943?
I have no idea what you're referring to. Honestly.
this
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Bridge_on_the_River_Kwai
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^I've never seen that before. Another writer on LJ suggested that this plotbunny reminds him of Battle Royal, which I also have never heard of before. I think its a good indication that this plot is a bit similar to good published books. I wish I could make something awesome out of it...
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