Thrilling FanFics by me?! UPDATE (OnlineReader,PDF,MP3,Exclu

[Mizzicco]

Ok, here is the new chapter~
It is very very very soon but I hope it doesn't kill you...
Well, some little wordss to the chapter:
First, the television show Conan saw (SlingeSIC^^), refers (naturally) to three of my favourite mystery shows: Fringe (quite a new one), CSI and NCIS... 
And with the next two chapter(s) I will get back to more activity of it and introduce some new characters...
Look forward to it~

But with no longer talk, here is the new chapter:

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PDF Download Link:  Coming After This Fanfiction Is Complete (With a special surprise~)!

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ONLINE READER:

Chapter 02

National Theatre, Tokyo, 09:17h


Click. Click.

The photographers were taking their pictures.
And not only the press and the police was here, no, there also were…

‘Mori! Why am I not surprised to see you here, heh?'

Inspector Megure stood right beside the dead body of Robert Sikaln.

‘He he.'

Kogoro Mori was looking as a bird was just flying into his face…

‘As I would be a curse or something like that…'

‘Death by three shots from right in front of him. Two shots at his ears. One in his left leg. He was tortured before the culprit was shoving him out of the window of the fifth floor…'

Megure gasped.

‘Who or what the hell is that kid?'

‘Y-Yes, correct, Conan. How did you know?'

‘Eh... Well, I saw a show on television yesterday morning where they had a similar case…'

‘And what show is that?'

‘I think it is called SlingeSIC.'

Megure nodded, then turned around to the victim again.

‘Robert Sikaln, 31 years old. He was the star actor of the National Theatre and was supposed to make a performance last evening at approximately 23 o’clock. His body was discovered by the director of the new show, Zolizare Maniloko.'

Megure wanted to go on but in that very moment, a bright light was exploding through the sky and in their eyes.

A light that you can see after an detonation…


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...TO BE CONTINUED!...

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And the second chapter is complete (I hope you liked it!), the next one is coming within next week (every chapter will take some time, two fanfics and one short story are taking their time... )
But don't worry, the quality won't be worse, it will be better, I can assure you!

And to give you an aperatif: It took me some full hours for research for this fanfiction, so I hope it will be one of the best~
So, until the next chapter, stay tuned for more information and keep commenting, thx.

Hey...That didn't make it better... I'm gonna kill myself so that I don't die later of all the suspense. Please revive me when you release the second chapter.

[akai-kun]

Hey...That didn't make it better...  I'm gonna kill myself so that I don't die later of all the suspense. Please revive me when you release the second chapter. 

You mean, the third one, don't you?^^ 
Oh and yes, I will~ 

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Some little question here at all:

Shall I return to my old style (of writing) or is it okay?

Some funny question here. 

[Mizzicco]

Hey...That didn't make it better...  I'm gonna kill myself so that I don't die later of all the suspense. Please revive me when you release the second chapter. 

You mean, the third one, don't you?^^ 
Oh and yes, I will~ 

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Some little question here at all:

Shall I return to my old style (of writing) or is it okay?

Some funny question here. 

Old style? I don't know what you're talking about...I only started reading your fanfics a while ago....And even then I started reading the late chapters. 

[akai-kun]

Hey...That didn't make it better...  I'm gonna kill myself so that I don't die later of all the suspense. Please revive me when you release the second chapter. 

You mean, the third one, don't you?^^ 
Oh and yes, I will~ 

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Some little question here at all:

Shall I return to my old style (of writing) or is it okay?

Some funny question here. 

Old style? I don't know what you're talking about...I only started reading your fanfics a while ago....And even then I started reading the late chapters. 

After writing some (I think there are 10+ now...) fanfictions, I think I changed my style of writing from beginner to something higher if you can say that^^
And from a friend of mine, I got the feedback that I got many (!!!) good and new styles of writing, well, so this is my question at you all, guys:

What do you think??

[sstimson]

Ok, here is the new chapter~
It is very very very soon but I hope it doesn't kill you...
Well, some little wordss to the chapter:
First, the television show Conan saw (SlingeSIC^^), refers (naturally) to three of my favourite mystery shows: Fringe (quite a new one), CSI and NCIS... 
And with the next two chapter(s) I will get back to more activity of it and introduce some new characters...
Look forward to it~

But with no longer talk, here is the new chapter:

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PDF Download Link:  Coming After This Fanfiction Is Complete (With a special surprise~)!

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

ONLINE READER:

Chapter 02

National Theatre, Tokyo, 09:17h


Click. Click.

The photographers were taking their pictures.
And not only the press and the police was here, no, there also were…

(Were is past tense. I think you meant are. The next question is how to rephrase it.
Maybe like this:)

While the photographers are taking their pictures, and the Police are questioning suspects,
who should show up but ...

"Mori! Why am I not surprised to see you here?"

Inspector Megure stood right beside the dead body of Robert Sikaln.

(Dead body might be redundent)

"He he."

Kogoro Mori was looking as a bird was just flying into his face…

(Again this action seems to be in the present and you are using past tense words)

Kogoro Mori looked like a bird had just flew into his face after hearing that.

"As if I was a curse or something" he thought.

‘Death by three shots from right in front of him. Two shots at his ears. One in his left leg. He was tortured before the culprit was shoving him out of the window of the fifth floor…'

"Death by three shots from the front. Two shots were near his ears, and one was in his left leg. He was tortured before the culprit shoved him out the fifth floor window."

( Removing extra words )

Megure gasped.

‘Who or what the hell is that kid?' he thought.

( you need to add the thoughts to make the reader understand that this is not being said out loud)

"Y-Yes, correct, Conan. How did you know?"

‘Eh... Well, I saw a show on television yesterday morning where they had a similar case"

'And what show is that?"

"I think it is called SlingeSIC."

Megure nodded, then turned around to the victim again.

"Robert Sikaln, 31 years old. He was the star actor of the National Theatre and was supposed to make a performance last evening at approximately 23 o’clock. His body was discovered by the director of the new show, Zolizare Maniloko."

Megure wanted to go on but in that very moment, a bright light was exploding through the sky and in their eyes.

A light that you can see after an detonation.

( I believe you mean explosion here. Explosions can be bright, but detonations are just like a pushing of a button and are a cause, not an effect. The explosion is the effect and this is what causes the brightness)

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[...]           

...TO BE CONTINUED!...

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And the second chapter is complete (I hope you liked it!), the next one is coming within next week (every chapter will take some time, two fanfics and one short story are taking their time... )
But don't worry, the quality won't be worse, it will be better, I can assure you!

And to give you an aperatif: It took me some full hours for research for this fanfiction, so I hope it will be one of the best~
So, until the next chapter, stay tuned for more information and keep commenting, thx.

[akai-kun]

@ sstimson:

Thank you for your suggestions~
As always, I will try to remmeber them and don't make this mistakes again...
And an edited version is on the way, folks.

THX!!!

[akai-kun]

Ok, next update~

The edited version of the second chapter (thx to sstimson!) will come out within the full release of this story as a PDF file...

But for now, here is the third chapter (it's a short one, but hey, it's introduction to the next one), enjoy~

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PDF Download Link:  Coming Soon! (After the complete release.)

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ONLINE READER:

Chapter 3

At the same time, at the Kuroba Mansion (Tokyo)…


Kaito Kuroba read the newspaper as one single headline on the last page of the newspaper caught his eye.

‘Robert Sikaln (31) murdered!'

‘Robert Sikaln… Sikaln. From where do I know him?'

Then, suddenly, Kaito remembered.

‘Right, he was a friend of my father. An old friend, also a magician, I think.'

Without thinking for long times, he stood up and went to the hidden room of the mansion where his special clothes were located.

And one minute afterwards, Kaito Kid was flying right towards the theatre…

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-to be continued!-

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Ok, here we are~
I hope you enjoyed reading the new chapter as I did and stay tuned for more updates coming soon~

Comments are welcome!!

[Mizzicco]

Ok, next update~

The edited version of the second chapter (thx to sstimson!) will come out within the full release of this story as a PDF file...

But for now, here is the third chapter (it's a short one, but hey, it's introduction to the next one), enjoy~

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PDF Download Link:  Coming Soon! (After the complete release.)

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ONLINE READER:

Chapter 3

At the same time, at the Kuroba Mansion (Tokyo)…


Kaito Kuroba read the newspaper as one single headline on the last page of the newspaper caught his eye.

‘Robert Sikaln (31) murdered!'

‘Robert Sikaln… Sikaln. From where do I know him?'

Then, suddenly, Kaito remembered.

‘Right, he was a friend of my father. An old friend, also a magician, I think.'

Without thinking for long times, he stood up and went to the hidden room of the mansion where his special clothes were located.

And one minute afterwards, Kaito Kid was flying right towards the theatre…

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-to be continued!-

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Ok, here we are~
I hope you enjoyed reading the new chapter as I did and stay tuned for more updates coming soon~

Comments are welcome!!

THE SUSPENSE!!!!!

_{Although there wasn't much.}

[akai-kun]

THE SUSPENSE!!!!!

_{Although there wasn't much.}

Well, it was quite a short one, hey, but I promise you, one of the next three chapters will hav an enormous amount of letters... (Ok, I do hope so... )

Next chapter(s) - wait did I just write chapter(s)?? Could there be more coming up?^^ - coming soon~ 

Oh, and thx for commenting, Mizzicco! As always, glad you liked it~

[Mizzicco]

THE SUSPENSE!!!!!

_{Although there wasn't much.}

Well, it was quite a short one, hey, but I promise you, one of the next three chapters will hav an enormous amount of letters... (Ok, I do hope so... )

Next chapter(s) - wait did I just write chapter(s)?? Could there be more coming up?^^ - coming soon~ 

Oh, and thx for commenting, Mizzicco! As always, glad you liked it~

SPOILERS! KKslider'll kill you for that.

[akai-kun]

THE SUSPENSE!!!!!

_{Although there wasn't much.}

Well, it was quite a short one, hey, but I promise you, one of the next three chapters will hav an enormous amount of letters... (Ok, I do hope so... )

Next chapter(s) - wait did I just write chapter(s)?? Could there be more coming up?^^ - coming soon~ 

Oh, and thx for commenting, Mizzicco! As always, glad you liked it~

SPOILERS! KKslider'll kill you for that.

Nice one. 

One day less to wait from the waiting line of days for that~

[Mizzicco]

THE SUSPENSE!!!!!

_{Although there wasn't much.}

Well, it was quite a short one, hey, but I promise you, one of the next three chapters will hav an enormous amount of letters... (Ok, I do hope so... )

Next chapter(s) - wait did I just write chapter(s)?? Could there be more coming up?^^ - coming soon~ 

Oh, and thx for commenting, Mizzicco! As always, glad you liked it~

SPOILERS! KKslider'll kill you for that.

Nice one. 

One day less to wait from the waiting line of days for that~

[akai-kun]

THE SUSPENSE!!!!!

_{Although there wasn't much.}

Well, it was quite a short one, hey, but I promise you, one of the next three chapters will hav an enormous amount of letters... (Ok, I do hope so... )

Next chapter(s) - wait did I just write chapter(s)?? Could there be more coming up?^^ - coming soon~ 

Oh, and thx for commenting, Mizzicco! As always, glad you liked it~

SPOILERS! KKslider'll kill you for that.

Nice one. 

One day less to wait from the waiting line of days for that~

^^
You'll see it in the next post I'll post right after this one (in one minute)...
Because the next chapter is up then~

[akai-kun]

Ok, as just posted, here is the next chapter (Number 4)!
But don't forget the hint from last time, that will be the case for one of the next two releases~
(If you forget: CHAPTERS!)

Well, but here is the fourth one for now, enjoy~ 

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PDF coming after the whole story is finished in a special and limited edition!

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ONLINE READER:

Chapter 4

‘A thief is a magician and a detective is just following our footsteps…'

National Theatre, 10:00h


‘Hey boy, does Mr. Mori know what you’re doing here?'

A police officer looked at Conan while smiling.

‘Err… No, I mean,…'

The police officer took out his gun and pointed it at Conan and in this moment, Conan knew what was going on.

He laughed.

‘Hey, stop kidding, Kid. I know it’s you, isn’t it?'

Kaito Kid put his gun away and showed a nasty smile.

‘How did you know, little detective?'

‘No police officer would have a gun like that and even not a false one.'

‘Yes, but well, it’s my favorite weapon to use, you see.'

After a short moment of absolute silence, Conan asked:

‘Why are you here, Kid? There was no impostor.'

‘Robert Sikaln was a friend of my dead father. Robert also was a good magician and I want to say thanks to him one last time in revealing his murderer…'

‘Oh, I see.'

Conan nodded.

Then, just some few seconds after he nodded, he heard something.

He heard the sound of a car…

Instinctively, he looked over the hedge and saw a black car driving away…

A black Porsche 356A…

Gin’s car!

And from this second on, he knew that the organization has to do with the murder of Robert Sikaln.

They had to.

He knew it.


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-to be continued!-

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Hope you enjoyed reading~

Please be sure to comment, thx.

Until next time,

Akai-kun

[Mizzicco]

Ok, as just posted, here is the next chapter (Number 4)!
But don't forget the hint from last time, that will be the case for one of the next two releases~
(If you forget: CHAPTERS!)

Well, but here is the fourth one for now, enjoy~ 

----------------------------------------------------------------------

PDF coming after the whole story is finished in a special and limited edition!

----------------------------------------------------------------------

ONLINE READER:

Chapter 4

‘A thief is a magician and a detective is just following our footsteps…'

National Theatre, 10:00h


‘Hey boy, does Mr. Mori know what you’re doing here?'

A police officer looked at Conan while smiling.

‘Err… No, I mean,…'

The police officer took out his gun and pointed it at Conan and in this moment, Conan knew what was going on.

He laughed.

‘Hey, stop kidding, Kid. I know it’s you, isn’t it?'

Kaito Kid put his gun away and showed a nasty smile.

‘How did you know, little detective?'

‘No police officer would have a gun like that and even not a false one.'

‘Yes, but well, it’s my favorite weapon to use, you see.'

After a short moment of absolute silence, Conan asked:

‘Why are you here, Kid? There was no impostor.'

‘Robert Sikaln was a friend of my dead father. Robert also was a good magician and I want to say thanks to him one last time in revealing his murderer…'

‘Oh, I see.'

Conan nodded.

Then, just some few seconds after he nodded, he heard something.

He heard the sound of a car…

Instinctively, he looked over the hedge and saw a black car driving away…

A black Porsche 356A…

Gin’s car!

And from this second on, he knew that the organization has to do with the murder of Robert Sikaln.

They had to.

He knew it.


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-to be continued!-

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Hope you enjoyed reading~

Please be sure to comment, thx.

Until next time,

Akai-kun

Yay! Finally some BO!