Black--Conan songfic

[ccppfan]

Hi guys! Here's not-exactly-a songfic for Conan! I think you can identify how I thought of this, no?

Well, here goes...

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BLACK AND BLUE  The bruises on my knees

RED AND BLACK A clash of nothing new

BLACK AND WHITE The fragile white snow, flying

against the backgruond of the night......


DARK NIGHT Bring me closer to my dreams...

LIGHT DAY Bring me closer to reality...

PRINCESS Stuck in this body, stuck in the plain,

Wishing I could choose.......


DARK NIGHT A knight to take me on a journey...

LIGHT DAY A prince to help me see the world...

PRINCESS Stuck in the grey, stuck in the pain,

Forced to make a choice.....


BLACK AND BLUE The bruises on my knees

RED AND BLACK A clash of nothing new

BLACK AND WHITE A chioce, forced to make,

Stuck in the grey, stuck in the plain, stuck in the pain,

Wishing to be free......


Flying across the sky,

In your embrace,

Fluttering,

As white, as light as snow........

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Is it good enough?  I sure hore so.  8)

[Holmes]

It´s very well thought, but if you put more verses on it, it would be better.

But as it is, really good. 

[ccppfan]

It´s very well thought, but if you put more verses on it, it would be better.

But as it is, really good. 

I can't think of many...

But can anyone point out the parts that I got inspiration from? It isn't that hard.

And btw, if anyone can help with music... 

Btw again, Holmes, your pic is now the background for my desktop.