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pofa wrote: I have never done a single thing wrong in mafia, never one lie or act of violence
Commi-Ninja wrote:I can handle a lot of things, but if all we're getting are monologues from one particular character, particularly one who is depressed/upset/etc., I lose it.
PhoenixTears wrote:Too much summarization.
It's one thing to summarize unimportant things vs. going on for pages about the color of someone's hair.. but to summarize everything just means that you don't get sucked into the story, because there really isn't a story there.

aly_angelflight wrote:PhoenixTears wrote:Too much summarization.
It's one thing to summarize unimportant things vs. going on for pages about the color of someone's hair.. but to summarize everything just means that you don't get sucked into the story, because there really isn't a story there.
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I haven't ever read it.GinRei wrote:Commi-Ninja wrote:I can handle a lot of things, but if all we're getting are monologues from one particular character, particularly one who is depressed/upset/etc., I lose it.
So you hate Catcher in the Rye?
xpon wrote:Almost all police is Detective Conan is less importance than the Detectives.....


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