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I'm sorry if this would look odd, or have some incorrect words or whole sections. I'm medicating cold, with some strong stuff. And i feel like stoned...  It's not a Vicodin, and i don't feel like M.D. House, but the idea pop in my head during the sleep. This is my first work here, and it's the first in this style so be carful

Here it is.

Title: One, two, three – Wits and numbers.
First Page. 
An old business building. However there are surveillances, and guards at the entrances.
A fat man, sitting behind the desk. He speaks on the phone. He has brown mustache, brown hair with a little bald point in front. He wears a dark green suit. And grey shoes.
Room is dimmed. Man smiles while talking. Finally he put phone down. He exits the room and goes into the hallway and into the very old elevator.
Elevator man is seen inside. Person has long blonde hair. He is wearing a uniform. Red one.
Second Page.
It’s a Next day. The same business building as in the first page. A group of people walks up the stairs. They seem happy, but they pissed off by broken elevator. They all seem the same. Wearing the same clothes. And all of them have the same hair, color and length. Blonde, long. And they all were wearing red uniform.
Like a bunch of clones. But it was obvious that there are a males and females there. They discussing event that about to start. Something about a secret.
Third page.
Police arrives at the scene. In the very same building. They shocked by something. Rio – New Crime Scene Investigator (CSI) - arrives at the scene. Tall, short silver hair sticking up, grey eyes. Wearing official CSI jumpsuit.
He seems tired. But apparently he overslept. Inspector Megure is little angry on him. And Rio makes a “sillyâ€

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That seems like a summarization of the chapter ^_^

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Yay! An answer! 
I thought noone will read it 
Yes it is. And that is only a first chapter... I have more of them... 8)

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Post them ^_^

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Title: Four, five, six – It’s just for fun!
First Page.
Kogorou is standing in the middle of the room, and staring at bunch of “clonesâ€

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Title:  Seven, eight, nine – There won’t be anyone to catch me.
First page.
Inspector is confused. He shares information with Kudo. He adds that he don't get it at all. Why would suspect try to hide like that. Among his copies.
Shinichi examine the suspects.
He noticed difference in their appearance. And finally we see that they aren't clones.
One of the suspects has glue on her hands. Other seems to be sick.
But his observation interrupted by Inspector. He says that one of criminalists was attacked on the last floor.
Kudo walk up, and sees open door. He enters and gets yet another clue about murderer. He sees a workshop. Equipment, bags...
Second page.
Inside the room, Kudo sees a monitor, a couple of odd items. And what its look like a mercury switch.
The very same moment, Rio sniffs his hand and realizes that he somehow grabbed explosives.
Kudo sees parts of the bomb, and a case filled with C4.
And Rio tested the residue on his hand and found out that it’s a C4.
They both rushed toward the exit.
Third page.
Clock is ticking. Bomb is not the only one; it seems that whole building is wired. And if bomb in the elevator will go Boom. This building will be destroyed.
But then something happens. When Kudo rushes downstairs, an old building gave up a piece.
A wire, which connects the bomb form the elevator with the other bombs, got severed. By a block of cement.
Forth page.
When Inspector gets both messages, he orders to clear the building. But, they hear the voice.
-No one will leave this room! If any of you tries to leave, I will blow this place up! – Voice said. – I will give you chance to leave however. If you’ll be able to point at the real murderer. I will set you all free.
I will tell you one more thing, this room filled with them. He’s not the only one. But it’s up to you to realize who is who.
The voice coming from dynamic on the table. Kudo says that on the last floor was monitor, and point towards the camera up on the ceiling. He whispers to Inspector that he thinks that he knows who is murderer. But he’s confused about what the voice said.
Fifth page.
Rio rushes towards the scene, and make sure that building is cleared. But when he tries to get to the room, he found out that door is locked. Rio calls Inspector, and hears about a booby trap. If someone leaves the room, this building will be destroyed. Rio says that he will call the bomb squad to try to defuse the bomb. But Inspector forbids it. He says that bomber is somewhere near, and if he sees the Bomb Squad he may set off the explosives. Rio says that he doesn’t know what else to do. But Inspectors phones battery is worn off, and contact is lost.
Sixth page.
“Clonesâ€

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Title: Ten – He should be taken care of.
First page.
Shinichi finally recognizes all people in the room. He remembers where he saw their faces. Pieces of puzzle lies in place. Kudo walks toward inspector and says that he knows the answer.
-I see that you know the answer, Shinichi Kudo! Then speak up! – Voice says.
-These people are connected, - Kudo says. – They don’t recognize each other because of that dress code. The only outstander here is Makoto-san.
-Very clever! So? Who is the real murderer?
-You, - Kudo answers. – You killed two people today, and assaulted a criminalist. However I believe that your plan is more complex than that. You wanted to punish these people, because of the crime they committed. And you wanted to see it yourself, aren’t you?
-You’re right! I’m impressed! But what crime did they committed?
-They’ve made a scam, in order to get the money. And they managed to catch your attention; you lost some money to them. But this scam caused death of several people. There was a big scandal about it four weeks ago.
-Right! – Voice said. – Good. You’ve made it! And as I said I’m letting you go!
Second page.
Door is opened. Inspector managed to calm people, and sees Rio outside. Rio seems sick, he’s panting, and his face covered in sweat. Rio’s holding a gun in his hand. When a group of people is about to leave. A voice speaks again.
-But you don’t seems to be surprised Kudo! Why is that? Don’t you want to know why am I did it?
-You’re a serial killer, what reason you may have, - Kudo says.
-Good. But my employees is quite clear about their orders. No witneses, that’s what Gin said.
Kudo is frozen in place.
Third page.
Rio pushes Kudo away from the door, and pointing gun at the man with the magazine.
-Drop it Grappa! Stop this game! Why don’t you surrender and spare us from killing you!
-Nagava? – Grappa says, dropping the act. – I should've pushed you harder. Let's try again!
Suddenly he pushes Rio away, and rushes towards the stairs. Rio cries from pain in his chest, and loses the chance to shoot. Grappa runs up the stairs. Rio and Kudo rushes after him.
Forth page.
Grappa standing in front of the shaft entrance and holding a detonator in his hand. Kudo and Rio stopped.
-My, my… - Grappa says. – I can’t believe it! You both looks so the same.
-Stop it Grappa! – Rio says. – Give up! A life imprisonment is better than death!
-Don’t talk about something you’re not aware of!
Grappa holds a detonator in front of his face, and Kudo sees that this hand has a fake pinky.
Fifth page.
A dynamic spring to life and voice suddenly says something odd.
-I was certain that it wasn’t true, but now I can see exactly what he meant. That was gooey thing on your record. Bad thing. You should go now, boy! You worn out, since your bottle is hold open too long.
Grappa stares in the space with odd look.
-He couldn’t…  - Grappa pauses, his face seems almost sane. - Fine then! I’ll go my way!
Grappa presses the button and throws himself into the shaft, right in starting flames.
Rio grabs Kudo and jumps away from the shaft. Explosion.
Sixth page.
Explosion destroyed part of the shaft, along with the Grappa and a part of the wall.
Rio and Kudo didn’t get injured. But Rio asks medics for some painkillers.
The group of people was arrested. Makoto grabbed Mouri and dragged him away, because she still needs his help.
Seventh page.
-That was unusual day, sometime I think I shouldn’t have joined the forces… - Rio says.
-I owe you one, - says Kudo. – I was too shocked to react.
-It happens sometimes, my name is Rio, Nagava Rio – Crime Scene Investigator – among other things.
-Shinichi Kudo – high school detective, currently working on tough case.
-Nice to finally meet you in person! Or should I say again?
-Again?
-You helped me in past, Kudo, - Rio says. – You helped my father to be exact.
-I’m sorry I don’t remember, and I think I have to go.
-Sure! See you again maybe!
Last page.
Kudo standing on the same roof, KID standing there too.
-Thank you Shinichi Kudo, - says KID. – As for the information. There is an agent of BO, which has been employed recently. I met him, and nearly died from his hands. He spared me, under one condition. That I found you and ask you to take care of that man. He says that he knows about your “lifeâ€

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Title: Ending.
First page.
Rio is sitting in Inspector’s office. Megure reading Rio’s report.
-I see, - Megure says. – But still, how did you managed to gather this information so fast?
-Evidence speaks to me, - Rio answered. – I just listen.
-Tell me the story from the beginning. This report is good, but I’d rather listen to you.
Second page.
Grappa enters the building. He sneaks as a guard. And then walk right into the room on the last floor. He took guards disguise off, and set up the bomb. He walks down, calls the elevator and kills the elevator man. He took his clothes, put on the wig and hangs dead body on the weight. When fat man enters the elevator, he drugging him with something and goes down. He hangs him up on the wall. Tying him to weight. He closed his mouth. Just in case. Right before a group of “clonesâ€