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Good day,

thank you very much for reading my fan fiction. This story is about my OC character whom I am using in the “shining Justice RP:Detective Conanâ€

*Reading*

Thank you for reading. *bows*

/gasp

AWESOME!

Thank you, bluekaito1412. Hopefully you will like the other chapters too.

Kaia wrote: Thank you, bluekaito1412. Hopefully you will like the other chapters too.

I can't wait for the next chap. ^^

I've read this one before and really liked it, looking forward to more! ^^

I stumbled on this thread by coincidence, I read the introduction and the first lines and thought, 'Seems good', and as of that, I gave it a try and read the prologue.
It simply was awesome, I loved it. Somehow, while reading it, I came to think of the Alex Rider novels (by Anthony Horowitz), funny thing. But I have one question remaining for the future of the story: Is the girl being forced to work as a scientist or more likely because of her 'talent', as an assassin? I personally cross my fingers for a cool assassin.

All at all, I loved the story and I can't wait for more chapters to come. It's awesome!!!

bluekaitou1412 wrote:

Kaia wrote: Thank you, bluekaito1412. Hopefully you will like the other chapters too.

I can't wait for the next chap. ^^

I have already sent the first chapter to my beta reader. Please be patient.

Yurikochan wrote: I've read this one before and really liked it, looking forward to more! ^^

Thank you for reading and liking it.

akai-kun wrote: I stumbled on this thread by coincidence, I read the introduction and the first lines and thought, 'Seems good', and as of that, I gave it a try and read the prologue.
It simply was awesome, I loved it. Somehow, while reading it, I came to think of the Alex Rider novels (by Anthony Horowitz), funny thing. But I have one question remaining for the future of the story: Is the girl being forced to work as a scientist or more likely because of her 'talent', as an assassin? I personally cross my fingers for a cool assassin.

All at all, I loved the story and I can't wait for more chapters to come. It's awesome!!!

I feel honoured. Thank you very much. However, most of the work was done by my beta reader.

Oh... this is definitely worth the wait, so I'll be patient.

It's really good, can't wait to the next chapter  8)

Thank you everyone for your patience. the first chapter is finally online.

Chapter 01: Forever A Slave

I, who had always lived in the light, was dragged to the dark side of the world. Locked away, I was lulled by the pure darkness, which resembled a veil of thick, suffocating black. Trembling due to the cold and fear, I was still lying on my side. Assuming that I was travelling in an airplane since I didn't know any other flying-type transportation, I was forced to leave my homeland and to move into another country.

The long hours spent flying to Japan were spent wallowing in fear, misery, hate and a myriad of other things that I didn't completely understand. The turbulence shook me from my pitiful thoughts a few times, the contents of my stomach churning uncomfortably, almost in the same way as whenever I see that horrible man.

After it landed in Japan, I was thrown into a wooden box, preventing me from seeing where I was brought. Again, the ride there – I assume it was a rather large car – was bumpy and uncomfortable, and it took all my willpower not to claw at my temporary prison from panic. After I was released, I was faced with a room, which was similar to the cold, metal prison I was in before.


All of my rights were taken, my freedom, my name and even the beloved golden hair I had inherited from my mother. They were tainted with that colour of their organization – black. I was stripped from everything I had left from my past and my parents, even the white dress. Wearing only a black rug, which nearly reached my knees and was sleeveless, my regret for surviving became stronger. It really would have been a blessing if I burned down with the mansion and my parents. The ground was cold and hard, uncomfortable compared the feather bed, thick frilly pillows and blankets I was always sleeping on. That luxury, which I always thought was a given thing, was one of the many I wanted it back. However, no matter how much I missed my previous life or how much I wished, none of them were restored to me. Silent, shimmering tears made their way down my pale cheeks.

I was so busy pitying myself and falling into despair that no one should have to go through, young like me or not, I didn't hear the door opening or the footsteps approaching my timid self.  I had only realized that someone was beside me when a leather boot buried into my abdomen, knocking the air out from my lungs for a long, painful second. Crashing against the wall behind me and falling down on the ground, I felt the pain through my whole body, the sharp ache in my spine branching out to my chest, limbs, and head.

I had never been subjected to such treatment before, only the friendly gestures of the maids and butlers when they served me or the comforting embraces of my parents. Just the thought that those gentle touches would never happen again made new tears spill over along with the tears of pain.

It was unbearable.

“Stop crying.â€

asking permission to print it!

I wonder why I didn't notice the first chapter was out 1 month ago

I loved this chapter and how it was well described <3

continue this story, please!!

I am sorry that I have not update the story for such a long time and that I was so inactive in that forum. University was consuming most of my time. Furthermore, first my local disc stopped working. Therefore, I lost a lot of important files and data, including my fanfictions. *has to re-write everything she has not published yet* Then my computer wanted to play a trick on me and stopped working too. *had to re-install everything*

However, there are also good news: I have finished writing the new chapter and my beta reader is working on it. According to him, the chapter might be up in two weeks. However, it might take longer.

I beg for your patience.

xpon wrote: asking permission to print it!

Please go ahead and print it. I do not mind.

breva wrote: I wonder why I didn't notice the first chapter was out 1 month ago

I loved this chapter and how it was well described <3

continue this story, please!!

Thank you for liking the chapter. I will give my best.