fanfic - Trouble?
Posted: June 1st, 2008, 10:47 pm
Konichiwa (Hello)... This is my very first fanfiction that I have ever written. Reviews and ratings are welcomed as well as suggestions for the next chapter. I'll continue to write the story if it's well appreciated.
If there are any grammar mistakes or if I got something wrong with the characters, you may let me know and I'll update it.
So enjoy reading!
- [shadow=red,left]cutepeipei[/shadow] -
Disclaimer:
I don't own the Detective Conan characters. If I do then I'll be rich and I won't need to worry too much about working... hehe. Yusaki Doku is my own character... (I'm planning on making this person mean and suffer... just joking... you'll have to wait and see)
Note:
Again, this is my first fanfic... so it might not make much sense but I'll try to make it interesting for people who like to read other people's work. Also, the format may not be the same as how the other people write their fanfiction.
As we know, Shinichi's parents travel all over the world.
While they were living in America, something happened and Shinichi doesn't know about it...
Ok... so let's get the story moving by summarizing a little bit of what happened.
I'm pretty sure you all know what happened to Kudo Shinichi... he got shrunk by the BO.
Now, Shinichi is living with his beloved girl under the name Edogawa Conan.
No one knows his real name except his parents, Agasa Hakase, Haibara Ai, Hattori Heji and Kaito Kid.
Hence, everyday, he must make sure that no one will uncover his real identity otherwise, it will become a big hassle for him.
- place: unknown -
In a dark room, a mysterious person, wearing black, was talking to two people about a certain mission.
One of them said "Don't blow up your cover"
- place: America, airport -
Yukiko and Yuusaku are waving their hands to a young lady heading towards Japan.
Yukiko: "Have a safe trip and be careful! Don't forget what we told you!"
The young girl with dark brown wavy hair, turned and smile. "Hai, I will and I'll give you a call when I get there."
And so, Yukiko and Yuusaku watched her leave...
- place: Japan, Tokyo -
It was the first time for the girl to be in Japan. Unfortunately, she wasn't really able to speak Japanese.
However, she can understand a little bit after all, she grew up in America.
The first thing she does is giving a call to Yukiko and Yuusaku.
"Moshi/mushi, Moshi/mushi... I have safely arrived in Japan, so you don't need to worry about me and I'm heading home right away"
As soon as she hangs up, she goes straight home to recover from the time difference/jet lag.
The next day, she gets ready to start her mission.
-place: Mouri Detective Agency -
As usual, Ran prepares breakfast for her father and Conan.
Ran: "Breakfast is ready!"
Everyone gathers at the table and starts eating.
After that, Ran and Conan get ready for school.
While walking towards school, Ayumi, Genta, Mistuhiko and Ai waves at Conan.
And so, they went to their appropriate school.
Ran meets Sonoko on her way and go to school together. Upon setting their foot in the school ground,
they heard from the other students that there is a new transfer student. The guys were very excited as they heard from the staff that the student was kawaii but don't know which class she will be attending in.
Ran and Sonoko head towards their class. The class representative asks them to stand up as the teacher enters the class.
Suddenly, while the teacher was teaching English lesson, there was a knock on the door and a young girl enters.
The teacher: "Oh! You must be the new transfer student." and asks her to presents herself to the class.
The young lady: "Hello, my name is Yusaki Doku but you can call me Shirley or Yusaki. It is a pleasure to meet you."
There was a total silence for a couple of seconds. The boys in the class were shocked & happy that she was in their class because she was a beauty and comparable with the previous Queens of Teitan High School. Upon seeing all the reaction, Yusaki showed a shy-full expression on her face.
The teacher asked her to take Kudo's desk since hasn't being coming to class lately. Yusaki greets Ran since she was next to her.
Before continuing his lesson, the teacher made sure that everyone treats the new student nicely as it is her first time in Japan and she'll need some help with her Japanese language.
Afterward, sensei continued her English lesson till the bell rang. It was class break time.
When the teacher left, everyone gathered at the new transfer student and introduced themselves to her.
Seeing all the people rushing to her, Yusaki was surprised and a little scared with all the questions.
Ran and Sonoko, seeing her troubled, went up to them to back off a little and ask them to ask questions one at a time.
The students asked her questions in Japanese but she couldn't understand them.
So some of the students who were able to speak English asked her and she answered:
"Where do you come from?"
"I come from America."
"Do you have a boyfriend?"
"No"
"So why did you come to Japan?"
"Cuz it's an interesting country and I have something to do."
"Eh... so you have something to do... So you are looking for a boyfriend right?"
"...no... well... maybe..." a sweat dropped on her forehead... because she was having a hard time.
And the questions continued till the next class started.
At the end of the day, Yusaki sighted as it was a long day and she gets ready to go home.
Ran and Sonoko see her leave and they go catch up on her... They wanted to become friendly with her since they didn't get the chance to ask any questions.
Sonoko: "Ne, ne... Yusaki-san, you really don't have a boyfriend?"
Ran: " Sonoko"
Yusaki: "hai"
Ran: "Gomei... Sonoko is always searching for boys."
Yusaki: "it's ok"
Ran, Sonoko and Yusaki walked out of the school and went separately to their home.
Coincidentally, Ran and Yusaki went to the same direction.
"So, Yusaki-san, what is the job/thing that you have to do here?" Ran asked with much interest.
"Gomei, Ran-san, I cannot tell you because it is a secret." said Yusaki.
"I see... so did you come here alone?" asked Ran.
"Hai" answered Yusaki.
"I see... It must lonely to be alone in a foreign country", Ran replied. "You can drop by my house any time if you need company"
"Arigato Ran-san... then I'll see you tomorrow at school then" answered Yusaki while passing by a grocery store.
Yusaki watched Ran leave until she cannot see her with a smile and then enters the grocery store.
- place: Mouri Detective Agency -
As usual, Mouri is watching tv and then starts to yell "Yoko-chan, Yoko-chan... kawaii"
Ran is in the kitchen preparing supper.
Conan opens the door and says: "Tadaima" (I'm home)
Ran: "Okaeri Conan-kun" (Welcome back Conan-Kun)
As Conan was putting down his school bag, Ran asked him how was school today and he said "It was ok."
Then, Ran prepared the table. While eating, Ran talked about the new transfer student, Yusaki-san.
Ran said to them that she was really beautiful but very shy. There was something about Yusaki where she couldn't put her hands on.
Conan didn't pay much attention about Yusaki but Mouri was interested because she heard Ran say that she was beautiful.
After supper, Ran and Conan did their homework and got ready to sleep.
While, Ran was in her room, she was thinking about Yusaki. Then she remembered that she had a very sad expression on her face and that something must be bothering her.
Hence, she has decided to help her out...
- place: unknown -
It was night already. The moon was high and shinning brightly.
In a dark room, half of the curtain was pulled down and the moonlight brightens the room a little.
A mysterious person was on the phone talking about the mission.
Unfortunately, it wasn't possible to see the face. However, it was possible to see a smirk at the end of the conversation.
- place: Mouri Detective Agency -
As usual, a new day starts with the normal routine as in waking up, brushing the teeth, cleaning up the room, prepare breakfast and get ready for school.
"Conan-kun, hurry up or you'll be late for school"
"hai, I'm coming Ran-neechan"
Both of them set off to go to school...
- place: Teitan High School -
Ran enters the school grounds and greets Sonoko. Both of them sees Yusaki in trouble as she is being surrounded by boys.
Ran and Sonoko help get Yusaki out of the crowed.
"Arigato, Ran-san and Sonoko-san"
"no problem" said Ran
"taku... I wish I was you... to be surrounded by boys" said Sonoko, being a little jealous.
Upon hearing that, a sweat drop has formed on Yusaki's head.
"Does that happen often in America?" asked Ran "Not really... I don't really go out..." said Yusaki with a sad tone yet trying to hide the fact that she felt lonely sometimes.
Hearing that, Ran had a gentle face and smile... since her last night thoughts were correct.
This has confirmed her thoughts and worries. Hence, she has decided to make her feel more at home.
Ran told Sonoko what she though about Yusaki and said to Sonoko that they should plan something fun to make her feel more happy.
Through out the day, Ran and Sonoko didn't interact/communicate with Yusaki much.
They were constantly whispering into each others ear to decide where they should go. Curiously, Yusaki went towards them to know what is going on.
But, they said it was nothing and Yusaki didn't ask them anymore questions. Yusaki turned and returned to her seat to get ready for the next class.
Ran stopped her as soon as she turned away.
"Ne... Yusaki-san, where do you live"
"eh... I'm still looking for a place to live. I'm staying at a hotel for the moment"
"eh... I see" answered Ran with much interest. "Then, would you like to say at my place while you are looking for a place to live. It will save you some money"
"Thank you but I don't want to bother you for the moment. Maybe another time"
"I see. So if you have changed your mind, just let me know"
The bell rang and all the students went to take their seat.
As the teacher steps in, the class representative called out "All rise". All the students stood up and sat down after the teacher said they can sit.
The class has started...
- place: Teitan Elementary School -
"Ne ne... Conan-kun, tomorrow is the Sunday, what should we do?" said the Detective boys.
They were desperate at there was no case for them.
"Taku..." said Conan and turns to Haibara "What do you suggest Haibara"
Unfortunately, Haibara didn't any idea since she acted very mature, didn't like much to play kids game.
Conan sighted and decided to go to Agasa's house to see what he was planning to do.
- place: Agasa's House -
After class, the detective boys go to Agasa's house as planned.
They were all excited to know if Agasa has planned an activity.
The door bell rang and Agasa opens the door.
"Oh... isn't you guys, come in"
"Sorry for the intrusion" said the detective boys.
"So what brings you boys here today"
"Ne, Agasa, are you planning any activity for this Sunday?" said Mistuhiko "hum..." Agasa contemplating. "Sorry, but I'm not free on that day. I'm going to America for a few weeks to visit a friend of mine"
"eh?" said the detective boys with a tone of deception.
Even Conan and Ai were surprised since Hakase didn't tell them anything about him going to America.
The detective boys were sad that there was no activity for them. However, to make up for that, they started to play video games for 2-3hours.
Conan and Ai was sitting on the sofa reading books. The other kids kept on playing without knowing what time it is.
Knowing that it's already late, Conan and Ai, caring for these kids, told them to go home.
Conan left with the detective boys at the same time and passed by his old house first before going back to Ran's house.
Shocked, Conan realized that someone has been sneaking into his house and starts to have a bad feeling about this as if there was someone watching him.
Who's is this mysterious person and the new transfer student, Yusaki?
What is the thing/job that Yusaki speaks off?
What's gonna happen next? What is this bad feeling that Conan has?
Well... to know the answers, you'll have to wait and see! -
If there are any grammar mistakes or if I got something wrong with the characters, you may let me know and I'll update it.
So enjoy reading!
- [shadow=red,left]cutepeipei[/shadow] -
Disclaimer:
I don't own the Detective Conan characters. If I do then I'll be rich and I won't need to worry too much about working... hehe. Yusaki Doku is my own character... (I'm planning on making this person mean and suffer... just joking... you'll have to wait and see)
Note:
Again, this is my first fanfic... so it might not make much sense but I'll try to make it interesting for people who like to read other people's work. Also, the format may not be the same as how the other people write their fanfiction.
As we know, Shinichi's parents travel all over the world.
While they were living in America, something happened and Shinichi doesn't know about it...
Ok... so let's get the story moving by summarizing a little bit of what happened.
I'm pretty sure you all know what happened to Kudo Shinichi... he got shrunk by the BO.
Now, Shinichi is living with his beloved girl under the name Edogawa Conan.
No one knows his real name except his parents, Agasa Hakase, Haibara Ai, Hattori Heji and Kaito Kid.
Hence, everyday, he must make sure that no one will uncover his real identity otherwise, it will become a big hassle for him.
- place: unknown -
In a dark room, a mysterious person, wearing black, was talking to two people about a certain mission.
One of them said "Don't blow up your cover"
- place: America, airport -
Yukiko and Yuusaku are waving their hands to a young lady heading towards Japan.
Yukiko: "Have a safe trip and be careful! Don't forget what we told you!"
The young girl with dark brown wavy hair, turned and smile. "Hai, I will and I'll give you a call when I get there."
And so, Yukiko and Yuusaku watched her leave...
- place: Japan, Tokyo -
It was the first time for the girl to be in Japan. Unfortunately, she wasn't really able to speak Japanese.
However, she can understand a little bit after all, she grew up in America.
The first thing she does is giving a call to Yukiko and Yuusaku.
"Moshi/mushi, Moshi/mushi... I have safely arrived in Japan, so you don't need to worry about me and I'm heading home right away"
As soon as she hangs up, she goes straight home to recover from the time difference/jet lag.
The next day, she gets ready to start her mission.
-place: Mouri Detective Agency -
As usual, Ran prepares breakfast for her father and Conan.
Ran: "Breakfast is ready!"
Everyone gathers at the table and starts eating.
After that, Ran and Conan get ready for school.
While walking towards school, Ayumi, Genta, Mistuhiko and Ai waves at Conan.
And so, they went to their appropriate school.
Ran meets Sonoko on her way and go to school together. Upon setting their foot in the school ground,
they heard from the other students that there is a new transfer student. The guys were very excited as they heard from the staff that the student was kawaii but don't know which class she will be attending in.
Ran and Sonoko head towards their class. The class representative asks them to stand up as the teacher enters the class.
Suddenly, while the teacher was teaching English lesson, there was a knock on the door and a young girl enters.
The teacher: "Oh! You must be the new transfer student." and asks her to presents herself to the class.
The young lady: "Hello, my name is Yusaki Doku but you can call me Shirley or Yusaki. It is a pleasure to meet you."
There was a total silence for a couple of seconds. The boys in the class were shocked & happy that she was in their class because she was a beauty and comparable with the previous Queens of Teitan High School. Upon seeing all the reaction, Yusaki showed a shy-full expression on her face.
The teacher asked her to take Kudo's desk since hasn't being coming to class lately. Yusaki greets Ran since she was next to her.
Before continuing his lesson, the teacher made sure that everyone treats the new student nicely as it is her first time in Japan and she'll need some help with her Japanese language.
Afterward, sensei continued her English lesson till the bell rang. It was class break time.
When the teacher left, everyone gathered at the new transfer student and introduced themselves to her.
Seeing all the people rushing to her, Yusaki was surprised and a little scared with all the questions.
Ran and Sonoko, seeing her troubled, went up to them to back off a little and ask them to ask questions one at a time.
The students asked her questions in Japanese but she couldn't understand them.
So some of the students who were able to speak English asked her and she answered:
"Where do you come from?"
"I come from America."
"Do you have a boyfriend?"
"No"
"So why did you come to Japan?"
"Cuz it's an interesting country and I have something to do."
"Eh... so you have something to do... So you are looking for a boyfriend right?"
"...no... well... maybe..." a sweat dropped on her forehead... because she was having a hard time.
And the questions continued till the next class started.
At the end of the day, Yusaki sighted as it was a long day and she gets ready to go home.
Ran and Sonoko see her leave and they go catch up on her... They wanted to become friendly with her since they didn't get the chance to ask any questions.
Sonoko: "Ne, ne... Yusaki-san, you really don't have a boyfriend?"
Ran: " Sonoko"
Yusaki: "hai"
Ran: "Gomei... Sonoko is always searching for boys."
Yusaki: "it's ok"
Ran, Sonoko and Yusaki walked out of the school and went separately to their home.
Coincidentally, Ran and Yusaki went to the same direction.
"So, Yusaki-san, what is the job/thing that you have to do here?" Ran asked with much interest.
"Gomei, Ran-san, I cannot tell you because it is a secret." said Yusaki.
"I see... so did you come here alone?" asked Ran.
"Hai" answered Yusaki.
"I see... It must lonely to be alone in a foreign country", Ran replied. "You can drop by my house any time if you need company"
"Arigato Ran-san... then I'll see you tomorrow at school then" answered Yusaki while passing by a grocery store.
Yusaki watched Ran leave until she cannot see her with a smile and then enters the grocery store.
- place: Mouri Detective Agency -
As usual, Mouri is watching tv and then starts to yell "Yoko-chan, Yoko-chan... kawaii"
Ran is in the kitchen preparing supper.
Conan opens the door and says: "Tadaima" (I'm home)
Ran: "Okaeri Conan-kun" (Welcome back Conan-Kun)
As Conan was putting down his school bag, Ran asked him how was school today and he said "It was ok."
Then, Ran prepared the table. While eating, Ran talked about the new transfer student, Yusaki-san.
Ran said to them that she was really beautiful but very shy. There was something about Yusaki where she couldn't put her hands on.
Conan didn't pay much attention about Yusaki but Mouri was interested because she heard Ran say that she was beautiful.
After supper, Ran and Conan did their homework and got ready to sleep.
While, Ran was in her room, she was thinking about Yusaki. Then she remembered that she had a very sad expression on her face and that something must be bothering her.
Hence, she has decided to help her out...
- place: unknown -
It was night already. The moon was high and shinning brightly.
In a dark room, half of the curtain was pulled down and the moonlight brightens the room a little.
A mysterious person was on the phone talking about the mission.
Unfortunately, it wasn't possible to see the face. However, it was possible to see a smirk at the end of the conversation.
- place: Mouri Detective Agency -
As usual, a new day starts with the normal routine as in waking up, brushing the teeth, cleaning up the room, prepare breakfast and get ready for school.
"Conan-kun, hurry up or you'll be late for school"
"hai, I'm coming Ran-neechan"
Both of them set off to go to school...
- place: Teitan High School -
Ran enters the school grounds and greets Sonoko. Both of them sees Yusaki in trouble as she is being surrounded by boys.
Ran and Sonoko help get Yusaki out of the crowed.
"Arigato, Ran-san and Sonoko-san"
"no problem" said Ran
"taku... I wish I was you... to be surrounded by boys" said Sonoko, being a little jealous.
Upon hearing that, a sweat drop has formed on Yusaki's head.
"Does that happen often in America?" asked Ran "Not really... I don't really go out..." said Yusaki with a sad tone yet trying to hide the fact that she felt lonely sometimes.
Hearing that, Ran had a gentle face and smile... since her last night thoughts were correct.
This has confirmed her thoughts and worries. Hence, she has decided to make her feel more at home.
Ran told Sonoko what she though about Yusaki and said to Sonoko that they should plan something fun to make her feel more happy.
Through out the day, Ran and Sonoko didn't interact/communicate with Yusaki much.
They were constantly whispering into each others ear to decide where they should go. Curiously, Yusaki went towards them to know what is going on.
But, they said it was nothing and Yusaki didn't ask them anymore questions. Yusaki turned and returned to her seat to get ready for the next class.
Ran stopped her as soon as she turned away.
"Ne... Yusaki-san, where do you live"
"eh... I'm still looking for a place to live. I'm staying at a hotel for the moment"
"eh... I see" answered Ran with much interest. "Then, would you like to say at my place while you are looking for a place to live. It will save you some money"
"Thank you but I don't want to bother you for the moment. Maybe another time"
"I see. So if you have changed your mind, just let me know"
The bell rang and all the students went to take their seat.
As the teacher steps in, the class representative called out "All rise". All the students stood up and sat down after the teacher said they can sit.
The class has started...
- place: Teitan Elementary School -
"Ne ne... Conan-kun, tomorrow is the Sunday, what should we do?" said the Detective boys.
They were desperate at there was no case for them.
"Taku..." said Conan and turns to Haibara "What do you suggest Haibara"
Unfortunately, Haibara didn't any idea since she acted very mature, didn't like much to play kids game.
Conan sighted and decided to go to Agasa's house to see what he was planning to do.
- place: Agasa's House -
After class, the detective boys go to Agasa's house as planned.
They were all excited to know if Agasa has planned an activity.
The door bell rang and Agasa opens the door.
"Oh... isn't you guys, come in"
"Sorry for the intrusion" said the detective boys.
"So what brings you boys here today"
"Ne, Agasa, are you planning any activity for this Sunday?" said Mistuhiko "hum..." Agasa contemplating. "Sorry, but I'm not free on that day. I'm going to America for a few weeks to visit a friend of mine"
"eh?" said the detective boys with a tone of deception.
Even Conan and Ai were surprised since Hakase didn't tell them anything about him going to America.
The detective boys were sad that there was no activity for them. However, to make up for that, they started to play video games for 2-3hours.
Conan and Ai was sitting on the sofa reading books. The other kids kept on playing without knowing what time it is.
Knowing that it's already late, Conan and Ai, caring for these kids, told them to go home.
Conan left with the detective boys at the same time and passed by his old house first before going back to Ran's house.
Shocked, Conan realized that someone has been sneaking into his house and starts to have a bad feeling about this as if there was someone watching him.
Who's is this mysterious person and the new transfer student, Yusaki?
What is the thing/job that Yusaki speaks off?
What's gonna happen next? What is this bad feeling that Conan has?
Well... to know the answers, you'll have to wait and see! -