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a fanfic i need help on

Posted: April 28th, 2010, 8:47 pm
by Akemi~chan
i came up with an awsome and cool idea for a fanfiction but i need more ideas. i promised my freind a chapter fic and i need help with the rest. anyone willing to help?

Re: a fanfic i need help on

Posted: April 28th, 2010, 9:42 pm
by xpon
Akemi~chan wrote: i came up with an awsome and cool idea for a fanfiction but i need more ideas. i promised my freind a chapter fic and i need help with the rest. anyone willing to help?
okay.. tell in this tread what idea you have...

Re: a fanfic i need help on

Posted: April 28th, 2010, 10:00 pm
by Akemi~chan
xpon wrote:
Akemi~chan wrote: i came up with an awsome and cool idea for a fanfiction but i need more ideas. i promised my freind a chapter fic and i need help with the rest. anyone willing to help?
okay.. tell in this tread what idea you have...
my sis and i had an idea of heiji getting injured. we came up with a great way for the and the injury but we need to make a good story around it and need help

Re: a fanfic i need help on

Posted: April 28th, 2010, 10:14 pm
by Sakina
Akemi~chan wrote:
xpon wrote:
Akemi~chan wrote: i came up with an awsome and cool idea for a fanfiction but i need more ideas. i promised my freind a chapter fic and i need help with the rest. anyone willing to help?
okay.. tell in this tread what idea you have...
my sis and i had an idea of heiji getting injured. we came up with a great way for the and the injury but we need to make a good story around it and need help
As if he's never been injured before.

You might want to be more specific.

Re: a fanfic i need help on

Posted: April 28th, 2010, 10:21 pm
by Akemi~chan
Sakina wrote:
Akemi~chan wrote:
xpon wrote:
Akemi~chan wrote: i came up with an awsome and cool idea for a fanfiction but i need more ideas. i promised my freind a chapter fic and i need help with the rest. anyone willing to help?
okay.. tell in this tread what idea you have...
my sis and i had an idea of heiji getting injured. we came up with a great way for the and the injury but we need to make a good story around it and need help
As if he's never been injured before.

You might want to be more specific.
lol point taken. paralized from the waste down from a bike crash. a black motorcycle ran him off the road. but i need a good story around it

Re: a fanfic i need help on

Posted: April 28th, 2010, 11:14 pm
by kaitoushinichi
Well, uh... Where's the story gonna go to after that? What're the characters gonna do about it, what genre is it going to be, et cetera, et cetera...

Re: a fanfic i need help on

Posted: April 28th, 2010, 11:21 pm
by Akemi~chan
kaitoushinichi wrote: Well, uh... Where's the story gonna go to after that? What're the characters gonna do about it, what genre is it going to be, et cetera, et cetera...
i don't know. that's why i asked

Re: a fanfic i need help on

Posted: April 28th, 2010, 11:22 pm
by Sakina
Akemi~chan wrote:
kaitoushinichi wrote: Well, uh... Where's the story gonna go to after that? What're the characters gonna do about it, what genre is it going to be, et cetera, et cetera...
i don't know. that's why i asked
You haven't thought this through too much, have you?

Re: a fanfic i need help on

Posted: April 28th, 2010, 11:25 pm
by Akemi~chan
Sakina wrote:
Akemi~chan wrote:
kaitoushinichi wrote: Well, uh... Where's the story gonna go to after that? What're the characters gonna do about it, what genre is it going to be, et cetera, et cetera...
i don't know. that's why i asked
You haven't thought this through too much, have you?
nope. i did come up with it and have my sis to help but it's her birthday tomorrow and i have stuff to do pluss a literature exam.

Re: a fanfic i need help on

Posted: April 29th, 2010, 12:49 am
by kaitoushinichi
So basically you just want to write a fanfic that has Heiji injured...

Don't you have any idea of what sort of fic you WANT it to be?

Re: a fanfic i need help on

Posted: April 29th, 2010, 12:58 am
by Akemi~chan
kaitoushinichi wrote: So basically you just want to write a fanfic that has Heiji injured...

Don't you have any idea of what sort of fic you WANT it to be?
not yet

Re: a fanfic i need help on

Posted: April 29th, 2010, 3:38 pm
by mangaluva
If you want it to be plotty, you could make it a BO motorbike because they connected him to Shinichi. If you want it to be angsty, it was just a tragic accident that brings the rest of his life crashing down around him. or that it was a murderer who wanted him to stop investigating this case and then comes back to finish him. If you want it to be romancy, it could be a tragic accident that nevertheless brings he and Kazuha closer because she was so scared of losing him that she confessed her feelings, or decides to personally nurse him during his convalescence. You could also go back to the idea of a murderer coming after him and have Kazuha kick his ass. I can't really think of any angle that an accident like this would be cracky or humourous.

You just need to think of what kind of scenes you'd most like to write- Silly ones? WAFFy ones? Sad ones? Uplifting ones?- and just work it around that.

Re: a fanfic i need help on

Posted: April 29th, 2010, 3:48 pm
by Akemi~chan
mangaluva wrote: If you want it to be plotty, you could make it a BO motorbike because they connected him to Shinichi. If you want it to be angsty, it was just a tragic accident that brings the rest of his life crashing down around him. or that it was a murderer who wanted him to stop investigating this case and then comes back to finish him. If you want it to be romancy, it could be a tragic accident that nevertheless brings he and Kazuha closer because she was so scared of losing him that she confessed her feelings, or decides to personally nurse him during his convalescence. You could also go back to the idea of a murderer coming after him and have Kazuha kick his ass. I can't really think of any angle that an accident like this would be cracky or humourous.

You just need to think of what kind of scenes you'd most like to write- Silly ones? WAFFy ones? Sad ones? Uplifting ones?- and just work it around that.
OH! i like the BO one. sounds good