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OC Introductions & Profiles!

Posted: December 27th, 2009, 10:03 pm
by kaitoushinichi
Okay, there are some OCs in fanfictions that a lot of people get confused about, they want everyone to know about, or are just OCs, so why not introduce them here??
Requirements: Full Name, Age, Appearance (hair, eyes, clothing) Favorites (food, color, etc.), Hobby, Important Facts (3 or more), and what fanfiction.

I'll start with my own OC:

First Name: Yuu (優)
Last Name: Sakamoto (å

Re: OC Introductions & Profiles!

Posted: December 27th, 2009, 11:09 pm
by Beastly
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First Name: Kazuhi
Last Name: Ichiro
Age: 16
Eye Color: Red
Hair Color: Red
Favorite Food: Bubble Gum/Spicy foods
Favorite Color: Red
Hobby: Reading works of Franklin Dixon

Important Facts:

    * Loves to interrupt to the talk of others
    * A guy who thinks he know it all
    * Has an IQ of 130
    * A guy who lacks imagination

From: "Kaito Kid and the Great Detectives"

Re: OC Introductions & Profiles!

Posted: December 28th, 2009, 1:22 am
by kaitoushinichi
Beastly wrote:
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Woo! Pretty Picture!


Okay, here's a "to be OC":

First Name: Marie[pronounced mä rE e] (マリエ)
Last Name: --- (Still trying to come up with a good one...)
Age: 16
Eye Color: Dark Brown
Hair Color: Black
Hairstyle: Strait, waist length
Favorite Food:
Favorite Color: Light Purple
Favorite Sport: Kendo
Hobby: playing with fireworks
Important Facts:
  • Looks very girlish, but is actually more of a "delinquent" and talks in a guyish manner
  • Is pregnant with a friend's son at the beginning of the story
  • Carries a nihontou (aka, katana) or something metal and rod-like at all times, and holds in a reverse grip
  • Is her friend Yakuto's Moribito*
  • Both parents were murdered when she was 4; Favorite place to soothe her memories about them are on the swings of the park between school and home.
From: (nonexistent... as of 12/27/2009)

*This to be story includes a small village in Kagoshima-ken, which has been, for the past 1000s of years, a village of scholars. Among these scholars are people called "Manipulators" and their Moribito, or Guardians. The Moribito are randomly "chosen" before birth; the telltale sign of a Moribito is that they already have their two canine teeth in at birth (and are abnormally large and sharp.) The next child born after a Moribito is the Manipulator who the Moribito guards for life. Each Moribito is born with a special ability that helps them protect the Manipulator (such as fighting skills, superhuman speed, the ability to control gravitational forces between themself and other objects, etc). Each Manipulator is born with the power to freely control one thing in the world (often very abstract, such as emotions, time, sight, etc.)
This plot is completely my original one, and I OWN IT!!! Unless Kaito steals it from me...

Re: OC Introductions & Profiles!

Posted: December 28th, 2009, 3:58 am
by ziraulo
Here are some of mine, no pics though...

First Name: Sakura
Last Name: Urameshi
Age: 13
Eye color: Black
Hair Color: Black
Hairstyle: Bob cut
Fave food: Cheetos, strawberry pocky
Fave Color: Red
Hobby: Practicing her aim (whether just throwing things or shooting), playing the Wii, eating, internet, listening to music
Important Facts:
  • She's a spy-in-training. No, seriously, she is.
  • She lost her mother at an early age, and claims that she was murdered and is trying to convince any detective she comes across to investigate.
  • Very forgetful. Head is mostly located in the clouds
  • Has a particularly bad aim
  • Knows arnis de mano

First Name: Usagi
Last Name: Urameshi
Age: 11
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color[/b: Blond
Hairstyle:Same as Misa Amane's, only longer
Favorite Food]: Strawberry Pocky, push-pops, salmon sashimi
Favorite Color: Changes every year, current one is green
Hobby: Playing on any game console, internet,eating, sleeping, pranking
Important facts
  • Sakura's Younger sister
  • Fave prank is the one with stuffing boullion cubes in the shower head
  • Also a spy-in-training
  • Fave prank victim is Heiji

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  • More mature than her sister

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  • From: A currently unpublished fic. Comming soon on FF.net.

    Summary:
    On a shootout against the organization, Conan discovers a secret of his mother's clan. Now, the shrunken detective finds himself with Heiji, Kaito and Hakuba training in a spy school! On the other end, Bourbon's identity is reavealed, and Ran, Aoko, Kazuha, and Akako are doomed to share the same fate as the boys. Everything seems to go all fine and dandy, until that fateful day in the mall. How are these teens going to handle spy school, their love lives, and the fact that they're working against each other now?!?

    PS: This fic still needs a title. Help please....
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Re: OC Introductions & Profiles!

Posted: December 28th, 2009, 5:11 am
by ccppfan
Hey it's Urameshi from YYH

Re: OC Introductions & Profiles!

Posted: December 28th, 2009, 12:51 pm
by kaitoushinichi
      • Wow ziraulo, that sounds interesting!
        ziraulo wrote: PS: This fic still needs a title. Help please....
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So, before I list any ideas, do you have specific preferences? (Like, do you want it to be in a phrase, one word title, English or Japanese, etc.)

Re: OC Introductions & Profiles!

Posted: December 28th, 2009, 1:54 pm
by kirite
Eh OCs?  Interesting.

First Name: Kumiko
Last Name: Nakamori
Age: 25
Eye color: Blue
Hair Color: Black
Hairstyle: Messy short hair
Fave food: White tuna sashimi and Koizumi's famous red potion (think Zelda)
Fave Colour: Blue
Hobby: Math, forcing kids to do math, mentally scarring Kaito and Toichi with fish, obscure occult facts, programming

Important Facts:

A genius student working in Hiroshi Agasa's lab.  She's happily married to Nakamori Ginzo and has a 2 year old daughter named Aoko.  Unlike the rest of her team she believes in the supernatural and believes in combining the power of technology and magic.  

From:  My RP

Re: OC Introductions & Profiles!

Posted: December 28th, 2009, 2:52 pm
by kaitoushinichi
kirite wrote:
Hobby: Math, forcing kids to do math, mentally scarring Kaito and Toichi with fish, obscure occult facts, programming

Important Facts:

A genius student working in Hiroshi Agasa's lab.  She's happily married to Nakamori Ginzo and has a 2 year old daughter named Aoko.  Unlike the rest of her team she believes in the supernatural and believes in combining the power of technology and magic.  

From:  My RP
Heh... nice... Do you have a link so I can see what it's like??

Re: OC Introductions & Profiles!

Posted: December 29th, 2009, 8:34 am
by ziraulo
Ooh...thanks so much, kaitoushinichi-san! Preferrences...let's see...well, I don't really have any language preferrences, as long as you tell me the meaning if it's in a language other than english! I'd like something catchy, as well.

And yes, ccppfan, Urameshi was taken from Urameshi Yuusuke of  Yu Yu Hakusho! Nice job  ;)

and here's another on of my OC's!

First Name: Miki
Last Name: Sakai
Age: 13
Eye color: Hazel brown
Hair color: Hazel brown
Hairstyle: Side ponytail
Fave Food: Mocha frappuccino, pocky and fries
Fave color: Gray
Hobby: Singing, composing, drawing
Important Facts:
  • Extremely shy
  • Cousin and roomate to Sakura and Usagi
  • Easily manipulated by her cousins. They usually use her to perform surveilance by clipping camera brooches on her
  • A proud meganekko!

Re: OC Introductions & Profiles!

Posted: December 29th, 2009, 1:51 pm
by kaitoushinichi
ziraulo wrote: Ooh...thanks so much, kaitoushinichi-san! Preferrences...let's see...well, I don't really have any language preferrences, as long as you tell me the meaning if it's in a language other than english! I'd like something catchy, as well.
Hmm, okay...

Titles usually depend on the length of the story and the speed it goes at (For instance, is the part about the guys running into the girls at the mall going to come immediately, or are you going to start with the part about the guy's finding the mom's secret, and developing everything from there?)

Also, is there a sort of a main idea that it revolves around? Like my story "Secrets and Promises" has the main idea that Kaito (main character in that one) is actually a test subject in the BO, and he ends up keeping a LOT of secrets from everyone and has to lie a lot, but the one thing he never does is breaking promises.

And another title "Infernale" (meaning hellish or devilish) came from the story of Saguru's past that I made up, and the things that this character does to Saguru, Kaito, Heiji, and Shinichi.

Re: OC Introductions & Profiles!

Posted: December 30th, 2009, 3:57 am
by ziraulo
it starts with the guys finding out Yukiko's secret, then it's the girls' turn. oh, and the longest length of time i have skipped in there so far would be a month

Re: OC Introductions & Profiles!

Posted: December 30th, 2009, 10:48 pm
by kaitoushinichi
      • ziraulo wrote: PS: This fic still needs a title. Help please....
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The three best that I can think of right now are:

-Unmei No Wa (Trans: Wheel of Fate) <<Got that from the Higurashi live action
-Tracing Fate
-Ura no Himitsu (浦ã

Re: OC Introductions & Profiles!

Posted: December 30th, 2009, 11:01 pm
by ziraulo
thank you!!  :)

Re: OC Introductions & Profiles!

Posted: December 31st, 2009, 12:07 am
by kaitoushinichi
First Name: Aisui (愛哀) <<His name's written as "Love" and "Sorrow" combined, and I made the second half of the name "sui" instead of "ai" because it doesn't sound right, and because of the similarity of 哀 to 衰(read: sui)
Last Name: Yamase (山瀬)
Age: 17
Eye Color: Same purplish color as Ran's eyes
Hair Color: Black
Hairstyle: Something sorta similar to Heiji's but messier (Basically, it makes him look hot... no pics though!)
Favorite Food: Curry
Favorite Color: Bluish Gray
Hobby: Playing Clarinet, Drawing Fanart!
Important Facts:
  • Is the oldest of the Manipulators, and everyone in the entire village sees him as a leader
  • Manipulates emotions
  • Is a complete playboy, but he does this to get over his lost love in middle school (He actually manipulates his girlfriends' emotions after about a week and starts to lead them away from him.)
  • His Moribito are his brothers Nitsu and Getsu (They were born as triplets, and are the first in history to be this way.)
From: The same nonexistant fic as the one about the Moribito... (I'm still thinking about titles for this one... Help?? Please?? But you won't see this fic for a while...)

In this story, each Manipulator actually holds an item with them at all time, that relates to their power (ie, a sight manipulator may have opera glasses; an air manipulator could have a wind chime, etc.) I can't think of one for emotions, so I'd like some help with that... I was thinking about a locket or a cross, but it doesn't quite fit well...

Re: OC Introductions & Profiles!

Posted: December 31st, 2009, 4:41 am
by Sakina
Well I don't like using OCs in fanfiction... I feel it takes away from the fanfiction part of the story.  But, that's just my opinion.  However I will introduce you to my favorite RP character that you will likely never see.

Full Name: Elphie
Age: 29
Appearance: Blue hair, yellow eyes, wears no clothing except a dark blue hooded cloak sometimes.  Most recently started sporting a gold bracelet with engraved flames (engagement ring sort of thing since she doesn't have fingers).  Known for her bright green color.
Favorites:
  • Food: Fruit kabob
  • Color: Blue
Hobby:
  • Spending time with her children
  • Honing her skills when she's not needed on the battlefield (she's a soldier)
  • Decorating, believe it or not
  • Being more badass than you (so say the other RPers....)
Important Facts:
  • She's not human.
  • She's not humanoid either.
  • Her coloring is not unusual where she comes from and she does not exist anywhere in our universe.
  • Magic isn't unusual there either and she has power over wind and lightning.
  • She has 3 kids so far and one on the way and only the one on the way belongs to her fiance (played by a different person).  The other three all have different fathers.  She's also got a sister (not related through blood) who fights on the opposite side of the war than her (also played by a different person).
  • She's a vegetarian.
What fanfiction: The Azuyan RP
Personality: When it comes to her duty as a soldier she can be very serious.  She believes idiots don't belong on the battlefield and doesn't show much mercy to the new soldiers she's in charge of because of this.  Since she's technically on the 'evil' side of the war she's not exactly the nicest of characters either.  She enjoys defeating enemies but is careful about who she fights.  She prefers battles she knows she can win.  If she does end up losing a battle she has no problem fleeing the scene if she is able.  Despite this she does have an ego when it comes to fighting and will gladly tell off any new recruit who thinks they can challenge her.  However, she has a huge weakness for children and will often take pity (at least a little) on mothers who have children of their own.

That's enough for now, I don't want this post to become too long... I've been playing Elphie for nearly 3 years now so she has quite the extensive history.