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Re: Thrilling FanFics by me?! (OnlineReader,PDF,MP3,Exclusiv

Posted: February 16th, 2010, 9:23 am
by akai-kun
Now, shall we?
Yes?
Yeah, I think so, too.
Here is the next chapter to read - along with the usual additional information. In this one, Conan and his friends are about to discover Wait, no. Wrong place.
This time, we're back with Kaito Kid. And it won't be long from now on when Conan and Kid will be fighting side-to-side again!

Spoiler:
Oh, and this is also the return of the chapter-for-chapter-release for now, I'm not talking about the next releases, maybe there could be another multiple release coming up, maybe not.  :P :P


Enjoy reading~ ;)


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ONLINE READER:



Chapter 24

13:11h
Still somewhere over Tokyo…


‘So, do you have your answers now? I have business to do.'
Nalters’ look was giving him an answer, too.
The kind of ‘No’ – answer.

‘So, what do you want to know else. I’ve already told you that I don’t know anything about these terrorist group – just that they’ll soon get a real problem with me.'

‘Yeah, and I ask – no, I tell you not to get involved with our affairs, Kid. This is classified CIA busniness. You get that or shall I write it down for you?'

‘No.'

He noticed a slight glimpse from another building and instinctively, he jumped to the ground.

And he was right.
The second he jumped, he heard something rushing through the air.
And as he looked at Agent Nalters, he got shocked.

His body was laying on the ground with a bullet in his head. He was taken out by a sniper.

Then, Agent Nalters’ mobile phone ringed.
As if he knew it, it was for him.

‘Hi there. You’ll forget about that all here, understand that? You’ll forget that he was dealing with the CIA or else we’ll have to shoot you, too. Do we have a deal?'

‘Y-Yeah. But who are you? Not CIA, I assume.'

‘Wrong guess. We’re with the CIA, indeed. But Agent Nalters got a problem to our mission and we’ve got our orders. But that’s all that has to interest you. Bye and be sure to hurry.'

The connection broke of.

What the hell was going on? First, an CIA agent talking to him about a terrorist group, then his assassination by other CIA agents… What is wrong with all today?

But he took his chance and ran as fast as he could towards his freedom.


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ADDITIONAL INFORMATION [!Spoiler!]


Chapter 24:

So, here we are, CIA killing their own agents. What this is all about, you ask? I won't tell you, guys, sorry, but you'll find out soon enough or the very smart people around here can already find out by re-reading the previous chapters...  :P ::) :o ;D ;D

Quite anice one to write, but be assured, the next ones will have a rapid development in it. And no, not that kind of development, Gosho wanted to give us with the last black organization story.
A real rapid development of story.

Can't wait for when you can read the chapters, so enjoy until then~ ;)



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Okay, that's it here, again. ;)
But I'll be back with another nice update very very soon.
It might even be sooner than you think.  ;D

Oh, and it would great if you would please comment, thx.


See you~

Re: Thrilling FanFics by me?! (OnlineReader,PDF,MP3,Exclusiv

Posted: March 7th, 2010, 12:56 pm
by akai-kun
Ok, I've got GOOD and BAD messages for you this time.

First, the good one:  I wrote some new chapters the last weeks and they're truly amazing and (what else?^^) AWESOME!  ;D ;D
But for the bad news, I'm now on a ski trip with class, so I won't be there next week what means, no updates then.
Sorry, folks, but I promise, I'll be back next week with BIG BIG UPDATES!

Hope you can bear me that week... ;)

Seeing you soon~

(Oh, and please comment on the last few chapters, that'd be great, thx.)

Re: Thrilling FanFics by me?! (OnlineReader,PDF,MP3,Exclusiv

Posted: March 18th, 2010, 1:42 pm
by akai-kun
Ok, yes, I am FINALLY back, sorry for the long break. But it was definetely necessary, otherwise I wouldn't have missed the last few weeks posting new stories.
Today, there's one new chapter. (I know: Only one!? But there are more chapters coming within tomorrow and Saturday/Sunday.)
Hope you enjoy reading it~

AND ONCE MORE: PLEASE COMMENT, THX.


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Chapter 25

He gasped.

Even after the many dead people he saw in his entire life and the ones he had to kill, he couldn’t look into her eyes, couldn’t look at her body more than once.

What he saw, scared him.
Her complete body was soaked with blood and everywhere he could look at, were several knife brushes.
But the most horrible thing about her dead body was her beautiful and somehow still shining face. The long, black, soft hair, the short eye-brows and her shiny skin.
She sure was beautiful.

‘No!'

He shook his head and focused again.

‘I am…'

Nakamori was seeking for the right words to say to Conan.

‘I am… terribly sorry, my friend. Terribly sorry.'

The second after he spoke these words, he thought of himself as how annoying such a phrase must be. You heard it everywhere, mostly in every well-known crime show on television. Why didn’t he say something else, something more emotional?
He wanted to put it another way but Conan just nodded and sank on the ground – right next to Ran. He took her cold and white hand, slightly hissing on it and finally, kissing it softly.

‘Ran… I am so sorry. I should have told you who I was, who I am. I’ve always been your beloved Shinichi Kudo but I couldn’t say it to you. I wanted… to protect you form this. I failed. I am so sorry, Ran.'

Then, out of the unknown, as if the soul of Ran was answering Conan from the other world, energy floated into his heart, into his body.
An energy so strong, he stood up so fast, Inspector Nakamori was surprised seeing him standing in front of him.

‘We have an organization to hunt down. Let’s go…'

Nakamori looked at him.

‘You’re sure about that?'

‘Yeah. Let’s not waste any more time, because time is a gift we shouldn’t and don’t have at the moment.'

Nakamori’s eyes were telling him that he was ready and together, they went outside.

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Ok, until next time (which will be soon)~ ;)
Oh, and please don't forget to comment, thx.

Re: Thrilling FanFics by me?! (OnlineReader,PDF,MP3,Exclusiv

Posted: March 21st, 2010, 11:02 am
by akai-kun
And last but not least, here's the additional information on Chapter 25:


Chapter 25

Okay, so while thinking about what I should write next, I thought: 'Let's get back to Conan. And Ran.'
And here we are, Conan saying good-bye to Ran, finally closing this chapter of his life, knowing that she'll never come back...
Well, that does truly sound like the words of a poetic, so just think about Conan saying good-bye to Ran, that should be enough. ;)
Also interesting, the last sentence. Conan and Nakamori walking outside the room together...
It shows what good friends they've become the time being.
And !SPOILER!: Kid will get together with them very soon.

But that's it for now,

Seeing you next time~

Akai-kun.


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Updates are on their way and maybe a new multiple-update??  :o :o
We'll see...

In the meantime, please be sure to comment, thx.

Re: Thrilling FanFics by me?! (OnlineReader,PDF,MP3,Exclusiv

Posted: April 8th, 2010, 10:24 am
by akai-kun
Okay, sorry, sorry and again sorry for the long time being with no updates, not a single one since March 18th.
Well, I would really love to say "Okay, here's an update with massive tons of new chapters for you to read..." but that wouldn't be the truth.
Truth is, my computer somehow managed to erase my latest written chapters and well, now I must re-write them and that is a lot of work to do along with writing some other stories and managing real life.
Even that's not a big deal at all at the moment. xD

Okay, but I hope, I'll be updating here very soon and this time I mean it, believe me on that one.

So, with no further dialogue here: Updates are coming soon and I'm sorry for the inconvenience.

Seeing you, folks~ ;)


BTW: In the meantime, please take you a few minutes to read the latest chapters once again and comment, thx. :)

Re: Thrilling FanFics by me?! (OnlineReader,PDF,MP3,Exclusiv

Posted: April 11th, 2010, 1:54 pm
by akai-kun
YEAH!!!!!!!

Here we are, finally. Or to say better: Here I am, finally. I'm sorry that it took me so long but here it is, the latest chapter and it is the brigde to Kid, Conan and Nakamori chasing the organization and the other mysterious 'companies' together. Hope, you like the new chapter, enjoy it~ ;)

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Chapter 26


Kid was running through the not so very often empty streets of Tokyo, his white suit covered in black dirt pieces.
Yeah, a roof top of Tokyo was not always the cleanest roof of the world. Or even Japan. Everything has been thrown away, even onto roof tops, which was somehow surprisingly amazing for him to believe. How could the trash from the people, the street get up there?

But he had no time to worry about it. He had to get to his little friend as fast as possible, well not exactly that fast but as fast as he would be able to run. He didn’t care if someone was following him and actually, there even was no one behind him. He didn’t care for the exhausted looks of the few people around. He did care for nothing at the moment except the lives of everyone else…

He had to tell that little detective of the matter, he must help him. And if someone else with the police would join them, it would be no problem at all. At that point, he was willing to take every necessary risk. And he meant it…

The buildings passed by: a tower, normal house, house, tower, company building, house… He had no eye for the beauty of the ancient built houses, he didn’t look out for kids running from street to street, playing with a ball. His steps shortened. There, he could see it: the last corner before the detective agency of Mouri. Hopefully, Conan would be there. He crossed the road, turned left and…

‘Inspector Nakamori? What are you doing here?'

‘Kid!'

Months ago, he would have chased him across the whole country to arrest Kaito Kid, the master thief of thieves. But after having found out about the secret of him and Conan, he had understood why they were doing this all. He couldn’t help it but to help them. And that also meant no more chasing after Kid for him. And it seemed that this was a good thing because after having stopped chasing the phantom kid, he got a 95% rate of catching criminals what was way better than just 63%.

‘So, what got you here, Kaito?'

‘Ah, well, see there is some sort of master criminals in town and they plan to attack Tokyo and it may be the organization that is behind all this. I can tell you that stuff later. What is more important: Where is Conan?'

Now it was Nakamori’s turn to answer.

‘Ehh, about that, we have a big problem here. You know…'

He couldn’t talk about it, he just couldn’t. Get yourself together, Inspector. Go ahead and tell him what happened. Yeah, his mind had won.

‘I have to cut to the chase here, I can’t talk about it, it is too horrible. You must know, Mouri and his girlfriend Ran were… They’re…'

‘NO! Don’t tell me they’re… Are they…'

‘Yes, they’re dead.'

‘Oh my god. Lord, why had this to happen? Who? Who on earth could do such crazy and murderous things?'

‘The Organization. Gin.'

The very moment he had said that, Conan stepped out of the front door of the detective agency, carrying one great bad expression on his face. But it did vanish a little bit as he saw Kaito. He got a little hope again. When Kaito would help them, the organization had to fall.

They had to. He felt it…


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Okay, that's it for today, I'll be back with more chapters this week. As always enjoy this chapter and please comment in the meantime~ ;)

See you then~

Re: Thrilling FanFics by me?! (OnlineReader,PDF,MP3,Exclusiv

Posted: April 15th, 2010, 12:02 pm
by akai-kun
Updates are coming soon, maybe even tomorrow, no, come to think of it, I'm busy tomorrow, so let's say the day after tomorrow but not that day after tomorrow... xD

AND: PLEASE READ THE FOLLOWING!!!!!!

I just wanted to promote a new hit story:  Detective Conan and the moon light Skull Baron conspiracy

Believe me, it's truly awesome. For those interested, it's a joint venture (project) between me and finex999 for all Detective Conan fans out there. It is -basically- for free.
More information can be read in the other thread.

So, click on the link above and read the story being published so far, it's one of the best you've ever read, want to bet?


See you all~  :D

Re: Thrilling FanFics by me?! (OnlineReader,PDF,MP3,Exclusiv

Posted: April 15th, 2010, 12:19 pm
by finex999
good work like always. downloading all the story now hahaha

Re: Thrilling FanFics by me?! (OnlineReader,PDF,MP3,Exclusiv

Posted: April 27th, 2010, 1:51 pm
by akai-kun
Thx, finex.
Really appreciating it.

So, the sad (nah, very sad) period of waiting is finally over... - after this weekend!
I'm coming back with some all-new chapters of my hit story (yeah, I know, advertising my own story^^) and hey, hang in there, it'll just be for some few more days.
After the weekend, there will be more updates coming and much more sooner because I'm taking a little break on my other FFs just for this one here.

So, in one sentence:  NEW UPDATES COMING THIS WEEKEND AND SOON AFTERWARDS. PROOFED INFORMATION.

Cu, akai-kun

Re: Thrilling FanFics by me?! (OnlineReader,PDF,MP3,Exclusiv

Posted: May 2nd, 2010, 8:10 am
by akai-kun
And hey, I kept my promise for once... ;)
(I intend to keep every one but it's not always possible...)

So, here are chapters 27 and 28 for you to read, folks. I'm still hoping to get some few more chapters out pretty soon (by which I mean around Wednesday or Thursday). But for today, these two chapters will have to do it and hey, two good chapters are better than more waiting, aren't they?

I really really appreciate feedback on my new chapters, so please take ypur time after having read them and write a comment, thx. ;)

A PDF Download for my whole story comes after it is done. And we have passed the mid already, so go, check my story out in case you already haven't.

Enjoy~ :)

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Chapter 27


One moment after Kid finally reunited with Nakamori and Conan to fight the Black Organization, their looks got caught up on a blue car standing nearby. It was burned to the last few metallic pieces. It was the bomb from before – when Nakamori arrived.
And there was a note lying on the ground right next to it: Greetings, Gin.

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Somewhere else nearby…

The sun was hitting the plaza unstopped. 93°F - it sure was hot.
You would be crazy to not wear short jeans and t-shirts. The odder were two men sitting at one of the more backwards set tables of the café Royal which had just opened in Tokyo. They were wearing black suits with striped red ties and both were holding an also black suitcase in their hands.
Suddenly, the left one of them nodded at the other man, stood up and walked towards the entrance.
Then, he stopped.

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A freshly married couple was walking down the street.
Laughing, smiling at each other, hands in hands.
The woman got pretty excited as she saw the café and one little puppy dog look at her husband was enough to get him going into the café with her for some ice cream. The moment they entered the Royal, the two men pressed a button each one of them was hiding in his hand. If you would have looked closer and you would have had a good eye, you could have seen cables going from their hands into their suits and back out into their suitcases. And if you would have had any brains, you would have known what was next to happen.

The café exploded.
The wave of pressure created by the detonation threw the married couple away from the tables and away from the ice cream seller. The flames were reaching higher and higher with the result of marmot and stones falling down on them. They had luck not standing beside the glass window front. Otherwise, the bursting window would have cut them for sure.
Smoke was slowly filling up the air left in the café and the view got more and more greyer every second. They couldn’t move. With a last look that left a burn in her eyes, Marry, the freshly married woman, saw her legs being captured under a big rock. And right next to her, her husband was lying.

‘Darling…'

She had to cough.

‘Are you al- alright?'

He didn’t answer. She took a closer look and she screamed.

‘NOOOOOOO!!!!!!'

He was dead. Blood dripping from his head all over his body – completing with some other blood stream from all over his body... It was such a horrible sight.

Everything got silent in her head. For her understanding, she stopped living and she really couldn’t breathe anymore. Tears ran from her eyes into her open hands. And then, it all went black…

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Chapter 28


There, somewhere in the fog, a shadow raised from the dead or injured people laying on the ground of the exploded café.

Slowly, it made step after step and the person was coughing.
But nobody could hear that or mostly even see him, they were all unconscious, injured, blind or even dead. The person slowly exited the café and got on the street.
He breathed the fresh air and sighed.

It was like a miracle: he standing up there, still breathing fresh air. Half an hour ago, he was supposed to die. The same men who blow the ambulance car up, the men who kidnapped him for information on their plans and the men who killed an innocent daughter just to scare a doctor, they wanted to kill him in here.
As soon as he recognized the two men in black suits entering the café, he had known their plan. But he couldn’t escape; he had been cuffed to a desk. As he thought of that, he felt something softly hitting his arm and he looked down just to see the broken handcuffs. One part of them was still cuffed to his arm.

Well, at least he was free and alive.

Then, he felt the fresh air touching his head. That was odd, where was his hat? It must have been knocked off his head during the explosion. But he got greater things to worry about then showing his scar on the head.

Megure knew what his next move had to be. He walked a few streets away from the burned and destroyed café and called for a taxi.

And as if someone above there in the sky would want to help him, a taxi appeared right the moment his finger had raised into the air. The driver opened the door and asked for the target.

‘Get me to the nearest Police Department. I have some friends to catch up with, so hurry up.'

The driver smiled as he heard the word ‘hurry up’, that would be a fast ride…

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So, I hope you enjoyed these two chapters, see you next time~  :D

Re: Thrilling FanFics by me?! (OnlineReader,PDF,MP3,Exclusiv

Posted: May 10th, 2010, 12:44 am
by sstimson
Yea I know . Long time no edit. Lose most of the internet for a while ( went from broadband speed to 10 times slower ) anyway I'll just edit your piece (only one chapter. This takes a lot of time) Anyway, if you have any question on why I changed something, just ask.

akai-kun wrote:

Chapter 28


There, somewhere in the fog, a shadow raised from the dead and injured people laying on the ground of the café.

Slowly, coughing, he took one step then another.
But nobody could hear and most didn't even see him. They were all unconscious,or dead. He slowly exited the building and entered the street. Then he took a of breath the fresh air, and sighed.

It a miracle that he was standing there, still breathing fresh air. Less then an hour ago, he was should have died. The men who blow the ambulance car up, kidnapped him for information, and killed an innocent daughter just to scare a doctor, had tried kill him.
As soon as he recognized the two men in black suits entering the café, he had known their plan. But he couldn’t escape; he had been cuffed to a desk. As he thought of that, he felt something softly hitting his arm and he looked down just to see the broken handcuffs. One part of them was still cuffed to his arm.

Well, at least he was free and alive.

Then, he felt the fresh air touching his head. That was odd, where was his hat? It must have been knocked off his head during the explosion. But he got greater things to worry about then showing his scar on the head.

Megure knew what his next move would be. He walked a few blocks and signaled for a taxi.

And then,as if someone above wanted to help him, a taxi appeared the moment he moved his finger. The driver opened the door and asked where he wanted to go.

‘Take me to the nearest Police station. I have some friends to catch up with, so please hurry.'

The driver smiled when he heard  ‘hurry’. This was going be a fast ride.

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Re: Thrilling FanFics by me?! (OnlineReader,PDF,MP3,Exclusiv

Posted: May 14th, 2010, 12:51 pm
by akai-kun
@ sstimson:  Thx once again for the editing!! As always, a great job, thx. ;)

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And new updates are coming up... No long blabla from me here, the next few days.
And I hope that I can keep up with new releases from then on, oh yeah, I forget, from next week on, I can... xD
So, see you all soon~

Re: Thrilling FanFics by me?! (OnlineReader,PDF,MP3,Exclusiv

Posted: May 14th, 2010, 1:45 pm
by akai-kun
And to cut the waiting time a little bit, here's a short extract from the next upcoming chapter - exclusively online...


‘Everything has gotten out of control. What the hell happened you idiots lost track on them? I thought it would all go smoothly and now you’re telling me you lost them?'

Anger was shown on his face along with a slight sign of fear but which no one noticed. His fingers crossed, he let all his anger out.

‘ARE YOU TOO DUMB FOR SUCH A LITTLE ASSIGNMENT!? I should have killed you by now, both.'

The men were looking at each other. Something like that could happen, weren’t they right? But once more, their thought proofed to be wrong. Deadly wrong…


Updates are coming soon, cu~

Re: Thrilling FanFics by me?! (OnlineReader,PDF,MP3,Exclusiv

Posted: May 15th, 2010, 1:47 pm
by akai-kun
And here comes the next chapter of my story - exclusively for you, guys~ ;)
Hope, it'll satisfy you - until next update. xD

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Chapter 29


‘Everything has gotten out of control. What the hell happened you idiots lost track on them? I thought it would all go smoothly and now you’re telling me you lost them?'

Anger was shown on his face along with a slight sign of fear but which no one noticed. His fingers crossed, he let all his anger out.

‘ARE YOU TOO DUMB FOR SUCH A LITTLE ASSIGNMENT!? I should have had killed you by now, both.'

The men were looking at each other. Something like that could happen, weren’t they right? But once more, their thoughts proofed to be wrong. Deadly wrong…

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The police station looked somehow impressive. It was no ordinary building at all, it was more like a modern but still traditional sight, everyone passing by noticed that but couldn’t put words behind their thoughts. The silver shivering windows, the height which was really impressive, the whole everything about it.

The cab stopped in front of the station and Megure stepped out, having already paid the driver who was smiling because of the extra cash he got for getting to the police station that fast.

Megure entered the building with fast and long steps, nearly running to the elevator. He pressed the button and had to wait some few seconds. Pling. The doors opened and he stepped in. Having pressed the button for the fourth floor, the doors closed and the elevator moved upwards. A mechanic sounding voice counted the floors. ‘Two, Three, …'

But before the sign could blink and telling him that the elevator would have had reached the fourth floor, something exploded. The ropes holding the elevator caught fire and it fell down, damn fast.

The few seconds after the explosion were pure horror for Megure. His stomach groaned and he almost had to releases its contain on the ground. The cabin fell down and down. Then, it finally hit the ground. But he didn’t get pressed against the ground nor did he feel great pain. Everything lost shape for a second but it was somehow different from what he had expected to happen. And then, his stomach moaned again and suddenly he felt the ground moving again and it fell down – even faster than before…

Bamm. The elevator crashed down and Megure lost consciousness. Everything was just dark for him – again in such a short time period…

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At merely the same time outside the station, another cab stopped with Conan, Kid and Inspector Nakamori in it. As soon as they had stepped out of the cab, all three of them knew that something wasn’t right. Police officers running out of the building and smoke exiting it into the sky.

What had happened? What was going on?

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So, that's it for today once again, more IS coming soon.
Additional information will be posted along with one of the next updates.

Spoiler:
Wow, the more I look at my few latest chapters and then back to the first ones (also of this particular story), I'm getting the feeling that my writing style changed a lot since then. What do you think? Post it as well in your comments.


So, after having 'Chuck' renewed for a fourth season, having an (most likely) awesome new series named 'The Cape' announced and this new chapter, I think everyone is lucky. With that knowledge I'm saying 'bye' to you, guys and see you next time~

Btw, please take your time and comment, thx.  :D

Re: Thrilling FanFics by me?! (OnlineReader,PDF,MP3,Exclusive Trailer + E-Book)

Posted: May 27th, 2010, 2:16 pm
by akai-kun
Okay, I have some problems on the technical site, sort of.
For everyone that doesn't understand that hint, new chapters are coming the next days (I won't say soon here because otherwise it'll take even longer for them to get released xD) and there will be a bunch of new ones or at least so I hope.

I must admit that I've been spending mucht ime on writing on my yet-to-be-released german fanfictions because of the premiere event on July, 17th and 18th.

But I'm back on my english one and I'll start releasing new chapters every day from the day after the day after [...][...][...] after tomorrow.  ;D
Yeah, I currently don't have an exact idea when that will be, but it will be soon. (Damn, I used the word 'soon'.^^)

So, cu then~  ;)