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Black Feather (Preiviously: The Clash of Black... and White?

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I have no where else to post this fanfic.

So I post it here. :)

There's...... some magical stuff that pulls DC out of the "reality" column, sure, but that's what I do.

Magic.

No WONDER I like Kaito so much. :P

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It was a normal day.

No, scratch that, that's not right.

It was a tragic day. For Aoko.

"KAITO!!!!!!" screamed Aoko for which felt like the 354,836th time this morning.

But still, there was no response.

Aoko stormed into Kaito's house and ask his mother, "Where is he?!?!"

His mother looked worried. "I don't know... maybe he went to school when I wasn't noticing... No, today's Sunday... hmm..."

Aoko sighed. It was her first 'date' with Kaito today. At least, that's what it was supposed to be. Now he was missing, and everything was upside down.

She ran into Kaito's room and gasped. It was a mess. His uniform was hanging on a lamp and a jumper was torn into two. The bedsheets were worse; ripped and torn in places, some patterns even illegible.

Aoko spotted a mark on the bedsheets. She touched it and went rigid.

Blood....... Kaito....... blood, murder... who....?

Her thoughts were muddled. A knock on the door woke her up.

"Nakamori-chan?"

It was Hakuba.

"Ha-Hakuba-kun!!" cried Aoko, "What are you doing here?!"

Hakuba shrugged. "I don't really know, but there was this feeling that Kuroba needed help. So I came..." He noticed the blood mark. "...but it seems that I'm too late, huh."

Aoko was near the verge of suicide. All she could do was try to stop herself from going absolutely berserk.

"But-but Kaito h-has to be fine, right? I-I mean, he's smart and all..."

"Who knows? By all means he could've been murdered."

Aoko turned and saw a witch on a broom floating outside the window.

More specificly, Akako.

"He was NOT murdered!!!!!" Aoko screamed.

Akako flinched. "Hey, I was joking."

Hakuba sighed. "Stop it. We should just tell the police about this."

And that's what they did.

"KAITO?! MISSING?!" yelled Nakamori-kebu into the phone.

"Yes!!!!"

"Not missing, kidnapped," corrected Hakuba.

"Uh, yeah!! Kidnapped!!!" said Aoko frantically.

"We'll find him AT ONCE!" Nakamori-kebu exploded. Every officer in the workplace turned to look at him. He slammed the table. "ALL OOOOUUUT!!!!!! SEARCH EVERY SINGLE NOOK AND CRANNY IN TOKYO FOR KUROBA KAITO!!!!!!! NOOW!!! AND I MEAN IT!!!!!!!"

It's not exactly easy not to obey an order like that, is it.

So they went 'ALL OOOOUUUT (!!!!!!)' and searched for Kaito.

~~~~~~Kaito's P.O.V.~~~~~~~

I did a little checkup on the things this guy tells me to or not to do. (What is this, Shakesphere?)

"So you're not gonna let me go."

"Nope," replied the man.

"And you won't let me contact anyone except you and your companions."

"Nope."

"And if I try to excape you'll find a way to kill me. Painfully. So I need to sit here until you're done with whatever you're doing."

"Yes."

"That's boring....." I said. Bluntly. A poker face is needed at urgent times like this.

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FIRST CHAPTER YAY YAY YAY!!! <3

Do you like it? I hope so.

Flaming allowed. Obviously.
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I like the fanfic so far. I hope to see more soon! ^^
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hmmm... interesting...
what am i saying? of course it would be interesting. it's kaito all right. ;D
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(Ahem, second chappie UP :))

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Conan was having dinner.

"Turn on the TV!!!" said Kogoro suddenly.

"What? Why?" asked Ran.

"YOKO-CHAN'S NEW SINGLE WILL BE SHOWN IN 3 MINUTES' TIME!!!!!!" cried Kogoro.

Conan sweatdropped.

"Okay, okay. I will."

Ran turned on the TV and the news blared from the speakers.

"Whoa!" cried Conan, covering his ears.

"...... and recently, four people have been reported missing from all over Japan..."

"Wait! Don't change the channel yet! I want to watch this," said Conan.

".... their names are as following: Yamahei Shizumi from Hokkaido, Kuroba Kaito from Ekoda, Fujimura Shion from Tokyo and, lastly, Toyama Kazuha from Osaka..."

"Ka-Kazuha-chan?!" exclaimed Ran in surprise.

"What, the girlfriend of that brat from Osaka?" asked Kogoro grumpily. (The news DID make him miss his favourite show; you can't blame him for being grumpy.)

Conan chocked on his food.

Ran blushed for her friend. "N-naw.... Not really..."

"..... The victims were said to be kiddnapped by an organisation unknown to the police. The headquarters of said organisation are believed to be located in Tokyo, and the police are...."

"O-organisation?!" thought Conan. "What orginasation?! Unknown to the police, too... Could it be...."

He jumped off his chair. "Let's go find Kazuha nee-chan!!" he cried in his most "pleeeeeease" kiddy voice.

Ran sighed. "Here he goes again," she thought, "And that all-too-interested voice can never be mistaken."

"Well.... Okay...."

As if on cue, Conan literally jumped into his shoes and ran out of the door.

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oooohhh.... caught my attention ;D ;D
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(Third chappie! Wonder how it'll go on...)

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"HAVE YOU FOUND THEM YET?!" roared Nakamori-kebu.

"N-no, sir, I'm afraid not..." stuttered the officer nervously.

The inspector folded his arms and snorted. Four kidnappings, one orginasation, and one big problem to solve. He sighed.

"It's in Tokyo, right? Then we can do a search there! Tokyo's big, but so is the police force!" muttered Nakamori.

"True, sir, but the people in Tokyo are in a panic now. If we interfere again, they might-"

"Who CARES what they think?! We're the POLICE, for God's sake!" cried Nakamori, slamming the table. "We have to find them ASAP!! You know that!"

"But sir, they might be in an even bigger panic, and then they'll start some kind of revolution against us!"

"What age is this, the 70's? We have smoke bombs! Start the search first thing tomorrow morning!" Nakamori put his papers into his drawer. "And I'm telling you... If you don't come, you'll be sleeping under a bridge in a matter of minutes! Do you understand?"

"Yes, sir, of course, sir...." replied the officer as he ran out of the office.

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The next day, the police arrived in Tokyo for a thruogh search. They knocked on doors, asked questions, did surveys, and, I'm sorry to say, avoided various objects that were flung at them.

'Get the #@)#&$ out of here!!!!!" yelled a woman.  Kicking them out of the house. The police didn't search THAT house again. She weld a frying pan, if you know what I mean. And a wine bottle.

It was 3:00 p.m., and the police were going over the last search. It turned out that some places had benn skipped for, well, various reasons.

Nakamori was furious. He barked at the officers like a drill sergeant.

"Do not stop searching a place because the owner is a beautiful woman or handsome man! Do not stop when you think the person is nice enough! Do not stop when they offer you a plate of cookies!" he said as he glared at a shy young officer, "Do not stop when you think it's time for lunch! AND DO NOT STOP EVEN IF YOU KONW THE OWNER!! UNDERSTAND?!?!?!"

"Y-yes, sir, c-certainly, sir," gulped the officers.

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(Ha, Nakamori's a little over the top, don't you think? ;D LOL)
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I like this fanfic ;D ;D
Very funny :D :D
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COOL ;D ;D
your great too

it's so funny,good,and exciting..... ;D
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(FOURTH!! ;D)

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All that was left now was an old warehouse.

The police had searched for a whole day. This was it.

Nakamori banged on the door.

"Anyone in there? Open up! This is the police!" he yelled.

A skinny man opened the door with a creak. He was about forty, his hair so long that it tickled his waist. He wore a baggy green t-shirt and dirty jeans.

A homeless guy.

"To what do I owe the pleasure of this meeting?" he croaked.

In other words, "What are you doing here?"

Nakamori coghed and said, "Did you see four teenagers nearby? Two boys and two girls."

"Dunno. I'm asleep most of the day," was the hoarse reply.

"Then... are you the only one who lives here?"

"No..." said the man and paused. "There... are other guys like me in there, but they serve the person who actually live in here..." The man sneezed and added, "I'm the doorkeeper, that's all."

Nakamori nodded thoughtfully. "Who lives in here then?"

"A grumpy geezer, that's who! We serve him, but he never shows no gratitude..." spat the man.

"Can we go in?"

The man grinned darkly. "Go riiight in! If you dare...."

"Hmm?"

"The old man hates ya! His son was arrested for smugglin'. The last officers that went in never came out again. Good luck to ya if ya have ta go in there!" he chuckled.

Nakamori gulped. This sounded worse than a haunted house.

Because ghosts weren't real.

But old men were.

"Let's... go in," gulped Nakamori. He shook his head. Why was he so scared? They had guns! He pushed the door open and stepped into the dark room.

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"Nakamori-keibu!"

Nakamori froze. He turned around slowly and saw...

Hakuba.

Akako.

And Aoko.

"YOU SCARED ME THERE!!!!" yelled Nakamori in anger.

"So sorry otou-san, but can we help in the search?" asked Aoko brightly.

Nakamori sighed. "Okay, okay... just this once..."

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(heheheh~~~~ :P)
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bluekaitou1412: Funny? Thanks! I "inherted" it from Kaito. :P (btw, can I just call you bluekaitou?)
shin_ichi01: Thanks! *hugs*

On with the fanfic! ;D

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As they "ventured" into the warehouse, they heard a bloodcurdling shriek.

"W-w-w-what was that?!?!?!" stuttered Aoko. She fled behind her father.

Akako smirked evily. "Maybe the geezer... killed them~?"

"Noooooo!!!" cried Aoko.

"Hakuba rolled his eyes and sighed. "Stop it already..."

Nakamori ran in the direction where the shriek was coming from and everyone followed.

It was getting louder and louder, until there was a buzz and the shriek subsided into yelps and whines.

Nakamori rammed open the door.

"WE ARE THE POLICE!!!! PUT YOUR HANDS ON YOUR HEADS AND SURRENDER!!!"

An old man trotted out and grinned. "No way um I gunna surrender!" he hiccuped.

"T-the old geezer!" cried an officer. Nakamori turned and gave him The Look.

Aoko looked around. There was a huge platfrom-like slab of stone in the middle of the room. And on it...

"K-Kaito...!" she gasped.

Aoko ran over to him. Kaito's shirt was torn into shreds and he was only wearing his jeans. His hands and feet were bound to the stone with chains. There was a deep cut near his chest and he was all... red.

"Blood..."

Aoko ran her fingers tenderly near the wound. Kaito winced and she drew back her hand quickly.

And that wasn't even enough. For Kaito was struggling. Some... thing was making him uncomfortable.

It was on his back.

An officer ran over and cut the chains. "You okay, kid?" he asked. In English.

Kaito wearily raised an eyebrow. "Wha.... KID....?"

The officer laughed and swiched back to Nihongo. "Whoops! I'm Australian. Slipped a bit there, sorry. You okay?"

Kaito sniffed. "Do I look okay?"

Aoko groaned. She grasped Kaito's back, and pressed gently on his waist, and hoisted him up. "There."

Suddenly, Kaito screamed again.

"Wh-what's the matter?" asked the Australian officer.

"His back! Look at his back!" cried Hakuba, running over.

Aoko turned her head and yelped. Something was sprouting from his back.

Something black.

Somthing feathery.

"W-wings?!?!?!?!" cried Aoko.

After a few seconds, the wings stopped growing and fanned out. Kaito stopped screaming and panted. He slumped down and Hakuba caught him before his wound hit his knee.

"Better take him outside," tutted Nakamori.

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MAGIC PART YAHOO! >w< ;D
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o
Kaito having wings? Now THAT'S NEW.

Hooray for Kaito!
I really love this fanfic. Very interesting ;D

And oh, you can call me bluekaitou. or whatever.
Spoiler:
and I'll call you J-d-e. kidding ;D
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bluekaitou1412 wrote: WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o
Kaito having wings? Now THAT'S NEW.

Hooray for Kaito!
I really love this fanfic. Very interesting ;D

And oh, you can call me bluekaitou. or whatever.
Spoiler:
and I'll call you J-d-e. kidding ;D
Spoiler:
BAH I'm not Jd-!!!! >< LOL ;D
And I like the idea. SEXY KAITO IS SEXY. :P

Kirite! Get in here and help me draw a fanart!! XD

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As the police freed the other teens, they found something unusual.

Yamahei Shizumi had long brown hair that cascaded over her shoulders. And just below her violet sleeve, some dark green scales peeked out.

Scales?

Fujimura Shion had short black hair. His glasses were smoky with the cold. His ears were pointy and small fangs showed where his normal canines should have been.

Pointy ears? Fangs?

This was getting weird.

"Uhh, sir, we're missing a girl!" cried an officer.

"Who?"

"Toyama Kazuha."

"Oh." Nakamori's brow furrowed. This wasn't a big warehouse, and they had searched everywhere to find them. But...

"So what do we do?" asked another officer.

"We go to the hospital," said Akako. "They're quite seriously wounded, especially Kuroba-kun, and it's a wonder he's even alive."

"True," agreed Hakuba. "They should be treated as soon as possible," he added as he turned to Nakamori.

Aoko nodded too. "But what about the.... uh... you know...."

"The wings? Oh. Here's a big coat to hide 'em," replied Nakamori, flinging a coat at them.

"That's the biggest coat I've ever seen!" laughed Aoko.

Kaito folded his wings against his back and put on the coat. It covered the wings and the wound perfectly.

Wound? What wound? It was fading away before Aoko's eyes.

"It's fading away!" squealed Aoko.

"Huh? Oh that. Guess I heal better now. And it doesn't hurt, by the way," said Kaito matter-of-factly.

"Um. Okay..." gulped Aoko.

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As they walked out of the warehouse, news reporters were rushing in from all over Japan.

China too. And Korea.

Lights flashed as the three (yeah they forgot about Kazuha... whoops) teens walked out.

"Are you all right?" "Did they do anything to you?" "Did they ask you for anything?" "Were you scared?"

Kaito rolled his eyes but smiled. "In response to the first question: Yeah.... it's nothing bad though. For the others, no and yes."

"Are you hiding something?"

Aoko's eyes widened. "N-no... LET'S GO KAITO!" she cried at him.

"Well yeah."

"WHAT! I TOLD YOU NOT TO TELL-"

"What is it then?!" Flash. Flash.

"Kaito....." warned Aoko as she pushed him away. Unsuccesfully, of course.

Kaito grinned and unzipped the coat. He flung it away...

FLASH FLASH FLASH FLASH FLASH!!!!!!!

His wings unfolded and spread out again. There were tiny red claws on the edge of them, which weren't there before.

"KAITO!!!!!!!!" screamed Aoko. "OH I GIVE UP!!!!" She stamped away and into her dad's car, taking the coat with her.

"It's my motto!" cried Kaito after her. "Entertain, and don't disappoint the audience!"

The car drove away hurridely.

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Yes I made up the motto. But it sounds like something Kaito would use as a motto... ;D
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Spoiler:
You're not Jd-, you're Jodie!!! ;D
OOOOHHHH Monsters.... I like the idea of Kaito having wings, now, he don't have to use his hanglider ;D ;D
WTH happened to Kazuha?

So far, so good! ;D ;D
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Okay, I'm sorry for late updates, cuz I had writer's block... And it was July the 1st! ;)

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Conan raced over to where the police cars were parked. "It has to be here," thought Conan, "the BO!! They're here!"

Ran ran after Conan and cried, "Conan-kun!! Wait up!"

Conan stopped. "That....!!!!"

He had arrived just in time to see Kaito take off. Into the sky.

"WHAT?!?!?!" He screamed in his head. "BUT THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE!!!!"

The reporters and police were driving away. Conan rushed up to Tagaki, who had somehow been there the whole time.

"What happened?!" asked Conan.

"Well... " The officer scratched his head and flipped his notebook. "They found the missing teens... And the old man who kidnapped them was arrested... Why do you ask?"

Conan ignored the question. "But I only saw three people!"


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LOL

Good thing you made it on time ;D
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