k11chi wrote:The way you write those scene transitions in there makes me think of visual novels.
Originally I marked scene transitions with this:
However, whenever I copied and pasted it all onto the site and then posted the story, those symbols did not show up and thus it was just this huge wall of text with no transitions so I panicked and just substituted in a bunch of Scene Transition
s. Now I know that if I write it up on-site over a gradual period of time instead of writing offsite and then c/ping it then the asterisks won't be deleted in the posted story, but it's way too late now.
"I know that some unkind declarations were made, of rash vows and unspeakable things"
"But don't you know? When the rain lets up, you'll find that we belong to each other still."
"Apologies? What is that between us? Words cannot bridge what words could not break."
"Let's wipe the gunk off our clothes, the warm trails from our cheeks, and smile once again."