DCUniverseAficionado wrote:I went and read all your stories (other than the second and third chapters of this story, which I'll finish and then update this post with my thoughts) and found them all very good, especially your version of the Red Woman (which is a stand-alone, correct? It's not going to continue?).
I wonder how far along you're going to take this, with Shinichi appearing at the Detective Koshien? Just the Kir arc? The Bourbon arc? The Rum arc, even? Or have you yet to work that out? Whatever the case, I look forward to where this is headed!
Serinox wrote:Chapter 6 - Detective Koshien, Investigation Phase
[After Junya's death, Heiji, Hakuba and Shinichi work together to solve it. Between Heiji's and Hakuba's quarraling and Hakuba's suspicion about Shinichi, can they do it?]
Chapter 7 - Three Detectives, Three Deductions
[Heiji Hattori, Saguru Hakuba, Shinichi Kudo - the three high school detectives all have a theory, but only one of them is right. The murderer of Junya Tokitsu is...]
Chapter 8 - The Taste of Awamori
[With the crime solved and no way to leave the island, Shinichi Kudo, Heiji Hattori, Saguru Hakuba and Natsuki Koshimizu calm themselves with the help of an Okinawan spirit.]
Chapter 9 - Identity Problems
[Juggling two identities can be hard, especially facing an accusation by Hakuba and potential police questionings. Shinichi is working on keeping his secret. Will he succeed?]
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