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Re: Alternate Bourbon Arc

Postby DCUniverseAficionado » May 5th, 2015, 12:59 pm

Loved it! Patiently awaiting the next one!
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Re: Alternate Bourbon Arc

Postby unclesporkums » May 5th, 2015, 2:32 pm

Thank you! I've actually written half of it last night, but I'm having trouble writing a convincing mystery with clues (It didn't even start out that way).
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Re: Alternate Bourbon Arc

Postby DCUniverseAficionado » May 5th, 2015, 3:04 pm

unclesporkums wrote:I'm having trouble writing a convincing mystery with clues (It didn't even start out that way).


Yeah, I'd have the same trouble—when I write, I just try to avoid it... yeah, I know—Detective Conan without mystery? Hah! What are you thinking?! I guess I need to get my hands dirty, in terms of writing mysteries.

Best of luck to you!
“Life is infinitely stranger than anything which the mind of man could invent. We would not dare to conceive the things which are really mere commonplaces of existence. If we could fly out of that window hand in hand, hover over this great city, gently remove the roofs, and and peep in at the queer things which are going on, the strange coincidences, the plannings, the cross-purposes, the wonderful chains of events, working through generations, and leading to the most outre results, it would make all fiction with its conventionalities and foreseen conclusions most stale and unprofitable.”
“Education never ends... it is a series of lessons, with the greatest for the last.”
― Arthur Conan Doyle, The Complete Adventures of Sherlock Holmes and His Last Bow
"I have decided to stick to love... hate is too great a burden to bear."
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Postby unclesporkums » May 5th, 2015, 3:33 pm

Thanks again!
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Postby unclesporkums » May 9th, 2015, 3:34 am

Chapter 2 is now up. It's a little bit shorter than the previous one, but the format worked for me.
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Postby unclesporkums » May 13th, 2015, 7:53 pm

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Re: Alternate Bourbon Arc

Postby MeiTanteixX » May 15th, 2015, 12:28 pm

Ooooh, I've been waiting for this....I'm gonna read this now!!
DC's Awesome Qoutes:
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Bourbon:''A child's curiosity and a detective's spirit of inquiry do have much in common''Image
Vermouth:''A secret makes a woman, woman''
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Mary/Gin:''It's like encountering a demon in the darkness...''
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Akai Shuichi:''Fear of death is worse than death itself''
Image
Shinichi Kudo:''following the smell of blood to arrive upon a crime scene, using every one of your senses to hunt the culprit, then once you've seized hold of him, sinking your sharp teeth(your evidence) until your opponent gives up the ghost, That's a detective''

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Postby unclesporkums » May 15th, 2015, 3:09 pm

Thanks!
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Re: Alternate Bourbon Arc

Postby DCUniverseAficionado » May 15th, 2015, 4:15 pm

Having read chapters 2 and 3, I'm very eager to see where this is going.
“Life is infinitely stranger than anything which the mind of man could invent. We would not dare to conceive the things which are really mere commonplaces of existence. If we could fly out of that window hand in hand, hover over this great city, gently remove the roofs, and and peep in at the queer things which are going on, the strange coincidences, the plannings, the cross-purposes, the wonderful chains of events, working through generations, and leading to the most outre results, it would make all fiction with its conventionalities and foreseen conclusions most stale and unprofitable.”
“Education never ends... it is a series of lessons, with the greatest for the last.”
― Arthur Conan Doyle, The Complete Adventures of Sherlock Holmes and His Last Bow
"I have decided to stick to love... hate is too great a burden to bear."
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Postby unclesporkums » May 15th, 2015, 4:25 pm

Thanks so much!
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Re: Alternate Bourbon Arc

Postby unclesporkums » May 16th, 2015, 2:59 am

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Re: Alternate Bourbon Arc

Postby MeiTanteixX » May 16th, 2015, 4:57 am


WOW,....you never fail to amaze me, that speed!
DC's Awesome Qoutes:
Spoiler:
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Bourbon:''A child's curiosity and a detective's spirit of inquiry do have much in common''Image
Vermouth:''A secret makes a woman, woman''
Image Image
Mary/Gin:''It's like encountering a demon in the darkness...''
Image
Akai Shuichi:''Fear of death is worse than death itself''
Image
Shinichi Kudo:''following the smell of blood to arrive upon a crime scene, using every one of your senses to hunt the culprit, then once you've seized hold of him, sinking your sharp teeth(your evidence) until your opponent gives up the ghost, That's a detective''

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Re: Alternate Bourbon Arc

Postby unclesporkums » May 16th, 2015, 9:45 am

Well, as I write it's like the story quickly comes together. I can tell what the characters are going to say.
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Re: Alternate Bourbon Arc

Postby MeiTanteixX » May 16th, 2015, 12:30 pm

unclesporkums wrote:Well, as I write it's like the story quickly comes together. I can tell what the characters are going to say.

understandable, and you did really well with staying faithfull to the characters' personality,...but I got a bit worried there when Ran blushed xP
DC's Awesome Qoutes:
Spoiler:
Image
Bourbon:''A child's curiosity and a detective's spirit of inquiry do have much in common''Image
Vermouth:''A secret makes a woman, woman''
Image Image
Mary/Gin:''It's like encountering a demon in the darkness...''
Image
Akai Shuichi:''Fear of death is worse than death itself''
Image
Shinichi Kudo:''following the smell of blood to arrive upon a crime scene, using every one of your senses to hunt the culprit, then once you've seized hold of him, sinking your sharp teeth(your evidence) until your opponent gives up the ghost, That's a detective''

DeviantArt:http://meitanteixx.deviantart.com/
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Re: Alternate Bourbon Arc

Postby unclesporkums » May 16th, 2015, 12:57 pm

I thought you'd believe that. Don't worry, it's nothing serious. It was just her "handsome detective" reaction. Nothing more will come of it.
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