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Would anyone be willing to help me work through my Persona 4 / Detective Conan crossover story? Mostly I need someone to help me make sure I have the characters behaving correctly and that the story flows reasonably. You don't have to know anything about Persona 4--I am trying to write the story well enough that someone who doesn't know the videogame can still follow what's going on. (You can be confused along with Ran!)
Please PM me if you'd like a look at the first chapter....