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A response to fanfiction 'Taken' Narrative poem

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This poem is dedicating to existing story in fanfiction 'Taken'.

Genre of poetry is free verse. :)

Disclaimer: I don't own characters as they belong to Gosho and plot belong to IU in person, who write this story long ago in fan fiction. I write narrative poetry!

I

Darkness is surrounded,
by all greys as visions filled
of nightmare Shinichi has see-
see at Ran lie on floor crumpled.
A worst mistake his enemy has done,
provoke the rage.
Under the night in tall tower
where has fight start,
Shinichi's rage has pit forward,
and launched himself into senseless fight
to end when he was captured.

Unfriendly and chilling eyes has met,
Watch the eyes of strange child
he claimed, he had not recognize.
His smile is politely cold,
and Shinichi had known him as Gin.
In his eyes his hope slowly dashed-
the moment he found himself captive.
He watched them return before he was been taken.

In gloomy cold cell he was locked in steely cuffs,
Shinichi see greys in the blackened room.
But he had not realized he is well remembered,
by his friends and an incredulous clad thief.
And his guardian Ran has broke down
In tears and all her cries drown but had not in vain-
Kazuha hears.
Heiji was livid.

II

All this started on day Conan was known missing.
The news spread like fire of link
non-stop through Osaka where Heiji heard
from television he received shock when reality sink
in his mind. Heiji took trip to Tokyo.
Followed by Kazuha, she had not met him,
only was there consoling Ran and suspecting Heiji
is up to something like rescue mission.
She never thought Heiji will hail a taxi
with white thief in disguise and charge as driver.
It lead to event Heiji could not think in wildest dreams.

At this moment Conan only can watched his captors
locked their prey in as target but Irish,
has plans no one knows but him only. His own chapter.
Conan has his own feeling his plans are to finish,
with only reason he himself are wanted alive.
Irish was that menacing,
responsible of his captivity and managing
the room was filled with darkness and hopelessness,
Conan believe he better off in prison spending
but lock in chains under Irish's icy cold watch.

All weapons Conan quipped were disarmed
except for badge in his pocket and no one suspect,
with amount of luck he has it in his palm
planning for escape and hope for helpful contact,
the extraordinary badge of Detective Boys
will lead traitor of Black Organization plan for rescue.

III

All plans were not on Haibara only,
she already suspected he once met trouble.
All she need was incentive plainly
and had heard of him speak when all was muddled-
Detective Boys already know the news.
They has their own plan and Genta
likes to call plan as Plan Braised Eel.
Ayumi was first who once call him panda
in past when she met trouble, now see
Conan hopelessly trapped but hear...

he ask for message relay through badge.
And Irish wasn't beside when he also plot revenge,
for deeds Gin was responsible of several death,
now drank coffee until he return before was robbed, breath-
was shattered the moment badge crushed under
the terrorist's foot with might, and anger.
His intolerable for his slight blunder,
he had not check every gadget and thought of hunger
of desire with dream to be praised by boss under his finger.
He locked hs eyes at the child,
'You better not try any tricks, Kudo Shinichi.'

And the child was left alone in dark room of despair.
The news of him being kidnapped and missing has reach police's ears.
All the clues, traces, and leads were impossible to find by pair
of police detectives who come to tower to search, as volunteer.
Fruitless search they now have leave them in despair,
but what left of plan has rest on teenage detectives, and Haibara.

IV

No news has reach police's ears and only Miwako knows
Well Conan was in trouble but could not place where he is located.
Wataru has protest few times as he knows chances are low
But he trust Miwako to guide him whenever he was around her as acting
Officer and partner, but was confused and muddled.
Little they know Heiji was in Tokyo, also finding Conan,
Now thief named Kuroba drive taxi car with Detective of West
As they drive Kuroba defy Heiji's order for unexpected trip.
Never they thought they will be been sniped
But they escaped from fury which aiming from group of B.O.

Those fury were another reason they turn for purpose
And revenge as retaliation bringing in justice.
Ran is another one of them but find herself in lost
When discovering Conan has Shinichi's phone inside
Kogoro's office. However she was now relying
On mother after she talked to her over the phone.
Eri hoped for all events turn well as she silently prays.
When they were in silence Kogoro was being himself as one
individual in police station. He was with Megure,
his old fellow colleague wracking their brains over case.

But they didn't know the thief accidentally has car
Sniped, their lives weren't better when run for hiding.
They didn't fare well in the adventure but it was parked
At road when they escaping.
They were on their way blindly not knowing
Where they head but have rough estimation.
The headquarter they plan for destination
Was now deserted and only Conan
Was there, who started freeing chain.
Within one hour, the chain drop away.

V

Day any time will pass by, Conan had let himself free.
As much he let his leg pumping, running fast
one could see his captor might roar with anger unleashed.
He didn't, dropped dead to ground by gun
which condemn him a dead fate.
Little did they know, Haibara was on the way
with feet could bring her to Conan's side.
Agasa wasn't sure where she was heading,
he possibly know where she likely been gone
to as Shinichi's disappearance had Tokyo fallen in despair.

Heiji was no where near Conan.
Heiji and Kuroba had themselve known
each other acquainted, but they were closer.
Winding down the streets, as wind blown
to their fate thrusting them forward-
chill did not help if they were too late.
Tension turn high for them when reached
with horror seeing young girl lying down

bleeding who left dying, they hoisted her up.
Haibara is the girl who got injured.
She had met Conan but did not see danger-
was shot and had him watched horror,
she fallen limp with him asking to stay strong.
He could not scream, but felt terror
and chills climbing up him, and wished he could shake
off snake had him crippled along with muffled cry.
Conan found himself hoisted up again, body want to fight-
off who was holding him planning not to let one escape.
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VI


Aware of Conan's predicament, his father does, and all Conan's friend of Interpol,
when Haibara was found unconscious it was clear getting to friend is difficult.
Tokyo isn't a great pushover, and so do America FBI, they know well.
Yusaku had taken long time to reach as hurricane as it make way curl-
ing to deem who dare to cross way. No thanks to traitor Vermouth who make hell
of a ride when Conan escaping. Every friend had racking their thoughts
together rescuing, as it was their motto now when small boy's life is in stake.

Conan could only see blackness where he was hold in boot
of car as prisoner as fake Scar Akai was responsible.
Shackled, tied up, he starting to pray for rescue.
Hope did not diminished but Scar Akai often like being hood
hide, Okiya reminiscing the time he spend with sister-
as Haibara see him as enemy but did not know well.
Hakuba was with duo of detectives, he was dragged in
as all fault went to Kaitou, which had him splutter by his sin.

Who else is despondent are no other than Sato and Takagi.
They were aware of their limited activity and power
they yield but it wasn't good enough to finding out-
found Detective Boys to learn Conan has his own gadgets
incredulously by new information. Little they did know
Haibara was injured, could not go to hospital,
only to be treated by Kaitou who wrapped injuries
afterwards, they all wait for her to wake.
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VII

Yusaku had endlessly paced in airport, any one can imagine
his shoes clicking and eyes looked distracted at times
hurricane did not fade away as aeroplane
had any one felt distressed he wasn't only one,
impatience had any one riddled until announcement
had made, shoes was rushed, nearly turned into run.
His wife Yukkiko could not walked away, was hid in dark,
of him planning to join search rescue party, but slumped
the moment he called: "I'm going to Tokyo."

That all he had said. His old friend James was aware
and they are Conan's friends could not leave
in lurch as they climb into private jet
which sending them to Tokyo joining mission,
door closed before jet depart
and fly to destination as no one knows in America
something stirred in Japan waiting for them
to confrontation, Black Organization
is in uproar, unknowingly attract foes

to their lair soon, but more to come-
Somewhere in scientist's Agasa's neighbor
sat Bourbon dutifully looking at cool cup
of alcoholic beverages which marked
name to his code name, how his action
told simile to uphold, of his great amusement.
That was what Haibara think of him
as member of B.O, no one knows.
The moment times has come, one see him
in different light, Haibara will change her mind.
In same time, she woke, faces greeted above, mind wind
back to earlier, hours ago as memory assault her
to gasp. Heiji looked relieved as question brewing.
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A/N: Urgh, I didn't forget this story! My mind is up to where the story leave open end for climax and rescuing, I hope I got numerals right, everything in future will be lot intense of this novel writing and poetry, everything will be coming down soon, it's totally new to me I'm getting into drift to have story up soon to satisfying end of contemporary poetry writing.





IIX

Everything is in haze, Haibara watched anxious faces
but doctors did not take any moment asking detectives
to leave, she had her round face buried under blanket
as no one could see her either crying. She was fortunate,
not kidnapped, but time did not spare what will happen
to Conan, detectives knew they can't dawdle and delay.

Time is now by Yusaku's side as he was now in plane
which taken him away to homeland, frowning, while could
not ask further aeroplane can sped up in bullet of light, would
be helpful, when it landed, first thing he did, was taking taxi
to his best friend scientist who was awaiting after receiving
his call, Yusaku made call after exiting arrival check out.

The police department finally picked up new lead,
despite higher ranks asked them not to, she was told and head
to tail Yusaku with curiosity, Takagi wonder why
but did not questioned any more when told not to vying
on Megure- he changed his mind joining to investigate off book.
"Aware of spy, I'm not the one you seek for tip off."
Satou looking up in wonder, as Megure vowed to take
responsibility if investigation gone south.
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A/N: I had not read any latest manga so going to catch up soon, don't forget this narrative is complete AU!

IX

While investigation was still on twenty four hours,
kidnapper kept on driving, planning not to let down his
guard, but never thought of what next few days
will bring. The place he heading to, first thing he do
was to open boot to find his young captive, carrying
him to headquarter where he put him on big table.

Meanwhile, Vermouth found Gin, who didn't suspected
was the one who killed Conan's first captor earlier,
telling her kidnapping is last thing in mind, which pricked
him of irritation as reason not to let it rest on his assumption.
Gin figured on his own, realizing their boss also involved

as well, suspecting Vermouth after a long conversation.
They went to second headquarter, but Gin knew
he was followed- she was behind him, as they
on same route, she found on gunpoint, he played
dangerous game of Russian Roulette. Interrupted
by Vodka, who did not suspecting her much while
Gin holding his reservation, bringing in authority.
Action moved forward to ask their boss, when
Heiji and friends picked up Agasa's laptop,
that can traced to Conan's shoe as it was bug-planted.
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I won't repeat disclaimer, same thing! I don't own them.

X

It was Haibara's idea, of remembering Conan's shoe,
that jolted her memory of their neighbor,
was on their side, telling them he also was worried.
Heiji was told by him, as she asked to be discharged.
Doctor insisting she should stay overnight.
She said "Have no wishes in the dark hide
away from confrontation." She already resigned,
after having long conversation with professor.

Professor then took her home,
but to rejoin by Saburu, they weren't alone,
Haibara was still scared, with hand trembling.
"I have many thing to say to you both..." he confessing
as Heiji and boys looked apprehensive at him.
Heiji and friends watched defensively
but Shinichi's best friend won't let Saburu in easily.
Professor told them Saburu was their ally.

They looked at him with shock,
and Saburu smiled, as he owe them explanation.
He did. They later learn he had Conan's
shoe was planted with bug, professor turned surprised
of relevation being told but accepted his participation
was essential to rescue their detective.
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A/N: actually I have plot in mind for this narrative poetry and often ran away. Want to create best, and.... totally drag, writing epic isn't easy.

Being busy, and now come back, I have no intention to abandon, still working on this narrative!

XI
As detective's capture, and absence had them
anxious, they had not rest, every moment
of twenty four hours. Kogoro was busy, and
Megure already traced and connecting dots.
Two important cops, Satou and Takagi were not
giving up, as they willing to work in team as supposed.

Yusaku's appearance was not deceiving, meaning-
he wasn't old to be actor, already have wife
who was born actress. He sense, somehow, all will coming
down... along with well connected friend, surely want evil's hide.
The destination they were looking for, reminded survivor's hunt.

A hope they were clinging, even faded dimly- but
only one who was nearest, Vermouth, you thought, heartless
she reminded of angelic girl, Ran, one who saved her.
Pill to her now was sickening. Immortality mean no love but stir
what keep The Organization going. Gin going to lose grip.
She did what she going to do, out of character, pointing gun-
when, Gin was resting, on sofa with eyes closed the moment, wanted it done.
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