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Re: The Clash of Black... and White? (Previously: My fanfic

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OMFG I totally forgot to tell you guys! I went on holiday for five whole days without DCTP!! I'm so sorry!!! *bows a million times* I went to Korea (Hiya DetectiveGirl~) and it was great! Where are those photos... *digs into backpack*

I'll post the photos later. Not now; we're not done packing yet.

*cough* Well... it's FISH TIME!!!!! ;D ;D

Kaito POV, seeing we all like the Moonlight Magician real badly. :)

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I inhaled nervoulsy. This was it. Heist Night.

I slipped my wings inside the glider. It wasn't as bad as I thought, but it wasn't comfy either.

Akako nodded happily and pushed me towards the stairs.

"You can do it! If you're scared you can always forget that stupid motto of yours~"

That's not happy, that's sly. Slyly. Hmm... not a good word.

I looked at my watch. Ten minutes left before the heist. I wonder what would happen, since I didn't prepare much for it this time.

Last night, I managed to hear a couple things by pure accident. That stupid Nakamori blabbed the entire heist plan at dinner.

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"Guess what! We've got a plan to catch the Kid!!" he cried at the table.

"Really? What kind of plan is it?" asked Aoko.

"You'll have to ask the little half-Brit here for that." He gestured towards Hakuba, who was sitting unnatrually beside him.

"We can't talk here, keibu..." He looked sideways at me, sitting across the table next to Aoko.

"Why?" I asked.

"It's fiine, Hakuba-kun! I'll tell it myself, if you won't!!"

"Uhh, keibu, I don't think--"

"We're gonna use FISH!!" bellowed Nakamori.

I spewed soup back into my bowl. "WHAT?!?!?!" I yelled.

Aoko glanced at me strangely and turned back to her hysterical father. "Wha...?"

"A fish plushie, to be exact!" he continued. Stupidly. "We're gonna put the Amber in the fish plushie!!"

I choked even more and my wings flapped every other way. Aoko looked at me with a worried glance and patted my back.

Hakuba buried his head in a hand. "Now you've ruined it..." he sighed.


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How was I supposed to--

"Kaaaaaaitooo~~~~~" cried a voice.

'Uhh oh..." I whispered to myself. I changed out of my Kid costume and leaned on the wall.

"What is it Aoko?" I asked as natrually as I could.

"There you are!! I've been looking for you! Come on and let's go inside the museum!" She ran up to me and tugged on my arm.

I shook her off. "No... I-I need to go to the, uh, washroom... I'll be right back, 'kay?" I flapped my wings and jumped back into the corner.

"Mou..." I heard her say. "Always like this... You're gonna miss out on the heist if you're not quick!"

I flew off and pretended that she wasn't there.

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Hmm... Not going as I thought it would... Fish will be next, time, hopefully! :) I'm so sorry!
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Poor Hakuba... Nakamori ruined the plan ;D ;D

Anyways, nice chap.
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I'm sry to say I won't be updating this for a while!

MY FINGER HUUUUURTS! ><

To understand what happened, do this simple experiment:

1: Try sitting on your finger.

1a: Doesn't hurt? That's perfectly normal.

2: Now, get one of those piano chairs that can open and close like a box and has a lid.

(You should know where we're getting to by now, do you?)

3: Sit on the chair.

4: Stand up and open the lid.

5: Put your finger under the lid.

6: Close the lid on top of your finger.

7: And lastly, sit on the chair.

Me: KYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!! O_________O

I'm not doing THAT again. *shudders*
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ATTENTION!!!!

I just found a fanart on Deviantart that matches this fanfic!!!


Here!: http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs48/i/2009/ ... _Akiko.jpg

OMG! It matches perfectly! ^^

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Almost. ;D


Pic belongs to Phantom Akiko on Deviantart.
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IT DOES MATCH!!!!
I like the pic.
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It's definitely funny xD
Interesting way of getting wings...I want them, too ^o^
However, if I would write a fanfic about my picture, it would really be a lot different
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YAY!! Thx for all the new updates here!
Great chapters!!!! Thx. ;)

And nice picture, it really fits! ;)
He's named Cool Kid and they named me the agent who feared them most...:  Shuichi Akai !

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Now that my finger's better, I can continue!

(Though now this finger's 1/3 longer than my left finger... TT__TT)

No POV this time...

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"He should be here any time now..." giggled Aoko. "Kaito's gonna be sooo angry with himself."

Akako grinned. "Yeah," she laughed.

Hakuba looked at his watch. "2 minutes and 47 seconds left... Kuroba's going to miss this."

"Seconds again, huh Brit," Hattori muttered as he strolled over.

"Why yes. It's always better. Ah, 1 minute and 51 seconds left."

"Tche...." sighed Conan. He looked at the balcony.

Any time now...

Suddenly...

POOF!!!!

Pink smoke emerged from the balcony. Fans screamed in delight.

"KID-SAMA~~~~~! <3" they cried.

As the smoke drifted away, there stood the infamous thief, grinning in delight.

"LADIES AND GENTLEMEN!!!!" cried the Kid.

The fans screamed even more.

Sonoko screamed along with them. "That's my Kid-sama~~~" she swooned to no one in particular.

Ai threw a tired glance at Conan. "Would she ever end...?"

"No," was the answer. Conan turned back to the theif.

Kaito noticed the tantei's glance and smirked. He walked towards the glass case where the gem was.

And the fish plushie too.

Kaito widened his eyes and managed to choke down a terrified tantrum. He examined the case as natrually as a person with fish phobia could manage.

"The gem's inside, keibu, I can almost see it," smirked the theif not-so-natrually.

Nakamori ignored the comment and signaled his crew. "WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?!" he hissed. "GO GET HIM!!!"

The crew ran towards the theif. Kaito shot a metal card at them with his card gun.

"Oh, no no no. No violence, please. Keibu, be a gentleman~" he stuttered.

Kaito threw a light bomb onto the floor. Bright, blinding light shot out from it and the crew sheilded their eyes.

He chose this moment to nick the gem, put a fake one where it should be, and putting on a disguise.

Not really a disguise, just a black cloak to cover himself. But anyway.

"He's gone! Again!"
umpedWho thought of this stupid fish idea?"

Hakuba gulped as the crew looked at him with menacing glares.

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"GYAAAAAAAAAA!!!" yelled the magician. He was far far away from the museum so he could scream as much as he wanted. It was a forest, after all.

He grabbed his head and pulled. He rolled in the grass. He almost jumped into the lake but didn't. There are fish in lakes.

After he calmed down, he changed out of his Kid outfit and sat down on a rock. He took out the Amber and admired it passionately.

Now... To see if you're the Pandora...

Kaito held up the Amber to look at the moon through it. But...

It was... a cloudy night.

"OH SNAP!!!!" Kaito facepalmed and fell over. (anime style)

What a night...

"Whatcha doing?" asked an 'innocent' voice.

"N-nothing..." Kaito hid the Amber hurridely and folded his wings against the black cloak.. "And who--"

Kaito froze and turned his head slightly. "A-Aoko! W-what are you doing here?" he stuttered.

The reply was a minute of silence. As Kaito tried to break it, Aoko spoke.

"Kaito... Why?"

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No checking, Kaito~ XD

The fish scene wasn't as exciting as I wanted it to be... oh well. I'm not good at writing crazy people. XDD

And the last few lines are new... Oooh the suspense! ;D LOL.
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xD That was amusing. I'll try commenting to cheer you on more, ccppfan : D

I still like how you did the fish scene :3
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The hilarity ;D ;D
I think this fanfic will do great as an OVA.
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bluekaitou1412 wrote: The hilarity ;D ;D
I think this fanfic will do great as an OVA.
Can't say any more... ;)
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WAHHH this Fanfic is the first fanfic I have really read and it's awesome! Keep up the good work ^_^
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YAY!!! ;D ;D ;D

TEZ REPLIED!!!!!! :iconfurrydanceplz: Woops failz. XDDD

I forgot a teeny but important line in the last chapter! So, go read again... Sorry!!!
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ccppfan wrote: YAY!!! ;D ;D ;D

TEZ REPLIED!!!!!! :iconfurrydanceplz: Woops failz. XDDD

I forgot a teeny but important line in the last chapter! So, go read again... Sorry!!!
Yes! I am no longer a fanfic stalker! Or, at least not to your fanfic xD

And read it, now write more! I can't wait til the next chapter now D:
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