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:o :o There has been a nearly three-weeks break...  :'( :'(

I admit it is unfortunate but here is the next chapter and I think it's the best one until now (-and a longer one also), but you have to read it first before I do more blabla and so on here~ ;)

Oh, and just one note here (announcement):

NEXT MONTH! - A never-been premiere raises out of the fog! Loaded with action, suspense, unguessed and unbelievable scenes, the next month will be a real event for you.

MANY NEW CHAPTERS AND ADDITIONAL INFORMATION FOR THEM ARE COMING OUT THIS DECEMBER!!!

The first multiple release comes out within the first week of December. Then there will be many more release dates being announced after every new release~ The series of releases you can't find anywhere else!

Stay tuned for more! It will be rewarded, I can assure you.  8)



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Chapter 5

The time for you to die has finally come…
This will be your last day to live and play detective, Cool Kid.
Today, you will die, Conan Edogawa aka Shinichi Kudo!


A single person was sitting right in front of some monitors that were showing the crime scene, the National Theatre.

The person was smoking and had a slight smile on the face which showed that it was not only a sentence said because of boringness but a sentence that is meant to be executed.

And it would be done today, he will die today!

------

National Theatre, 10:15h

Conan shrouded.

A little sense of fear has just reached him but he didn’t know what the reason could be.

Ignoring this matter, he continued concentrating on the case.

‘So, Kid, tell me, could this all be only a coincidence? I mean with the Porsche 356A and that he was a friend of your fathers’?'

Kid answered immediately.

‘No! The organization is behind all this for sure! There can’t be another explanation of this all.'

“But if…'

‘No ‘if’! This is the case and so there’s no need for thousands of ‘if’s, understand?'

Conan was worried about Kid. He did never see him like this.

‘Could it be that there’s another thing he is after and what he did not tell me about?'

But he did erase this thought out of his memory within a second.

‘Why do I even think about something like that? Kid is a good guy.'

Slowly, he nodded.

‘You’re right, Kid. No more.'

Kid gave Conan a thankful expression, then got back to the case.


------

Meanwhile, just three miles away from the National Theatre…

‘He is a risk factor. We have to get him out of the way if everything shall function as it should.'

The deep voice of a hidden figure spoke slowly and clearly.

‘Everything, I mean EVERYTHING, must go well. Is our spy in place?'

Another voice answered.

‘Yes, all is ready to start except the risk factor.'

‘Good.'

And after a short pause, the man continued.

‘Kill the risk factor and everyone connected to him!'

‘Yes, Sir.'

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-to be continued!-


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Tell me what you think about the newest chapter in posting a comment here.

And... Did the announcement cheer you up? Post a comment! Thx.

Next update(s) --- COMING SOON!


Until next time,

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akai-kun wrote: :o :o There has been a nearly three-weeks break...  :'( :'(

I admit it is unfortunate but here is the next chapter and I think it's the best one until now (-and a longer one also), but you have to read it first before I do more blabla and so on here~ ;)

Oh, and just one note here (announcement):

NEXT MONTH! - A never-been premiere raises out of the fog! Loaded with action, suspense, unguessed and unbelievable scenes, the next month will be a real event for you.

MANY NEW CHAPTERS AND ADDITIONAL INFORMATIONS FOR THEM ARE COMING OUT THIS DECEMBER!!!

The first multiple release comes out within the first week of December. Then there will be many more release dates being announced after every new release~ The series of releases you can't find anywhere else!

Stay tuned for more! It will be rewarded, I can assure you.  8)



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Nice chapter.

And maybe you should work in Public Relations. 

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Hey, I finally had the time to read your fanfic.
I just read Book 02 and I have to say that its really great!
I liked the part, where Hakuba came lol :D. Three perfect characters and a great (Zusammenarbeit xD).
The end was perfect, because its cool that the normal life began again. I love their trouble xD.
I also will read the others. YOu still are writing, arent you?
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ShinRan36 wrote: Hey, I finally had the time to read your fanfic.
I just read Book 02 and I have to say that its really great!
I liked the part, where Hakuba came lol :D. Three perfect characters and a great (Zusammenarbeit xD).
The end was perfect, because its cool that the normal life began again. I love their trouble xD.
I also will read the others. YOu still are writing, arent you?
Hey, thanks, I really really am glad that you like the chapters.
And yes, I'm still writing~
Ok, there was a looooooooooooooooooooong break, but that's it, it's marching again~ ;)

Book 02, eh? - Well, there's plenty more for you left to read, so need to worry about the long break...
But this fanfiction (the one with Conan at the National Theatre) is going to be an expensive and a great one, if you get what I mean. ;)

Next update coming soon~ ;)
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Mizzicco wrote:
akai-kun wrote: :o :o There has been a nearly three-weeks break...  :'( :'(

I admit it is unfortunate but here is the next chapter and I think it's the best one until now (-and a longer one also), but you have to read it first before I do more blabla and so on here~ ;)

Oh, and just one note here (announcement):

NEXT MONTH! - A never-been premiere raises out of the fog! Loaded with action, suspense, unguessed and unbelievable scenes, the next month will be a real event for you.

MANY NEW CHAPTERS AND ADDITIONAL INFORMATIONS FOR THEM ARE COMING OUT THIS DECEMBER!!!

The first multiple release comes out within the first week of December. Then there will be many more release dates being announced after every new release~ The series of releases you can't find anywhere else!

Stay tuned for more! It will be rewarded, I can assure you.  8)



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Nice chapter.

And maybe you should work in Public Relations. 

;D
Thx.  ;D
Wait for the next ones~
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akai-kun wrote:
ShinRan36 wrote: Hey, I finally had the time to read your fanfic.
I just read Book 02 and I have to say that its really great!
I liked the part, where Hakuba came lol :D. Three perfect characters and a great (Zusammenarbeit xD).
The end was perfect, because its cool that the normal life began again. I love their trouble xD.
I also will read the others. YOu still are writing, arent you?
Hey, thanks, I really really am glad that you like the chapters.
And yes, I'm still writing~
Ok, there was a looooooooooooooooooooong break, but that's it, it's marching again~ ;)

Book 02, eh? - Well, there's plenty more for you left to read, so need to worry about the long break...
But this fanfiction (the one with Conan at the National Theatre) is going to be an expensive and a great one, if you get what I mean. ;)

Next update coming soon~ ;)
Lol, yes I know, there is more left I have to read :D
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And we're coming closer to December.

I hope you are prepared because this release series will blow your brains out~ ;)

Seeing you in a few couple of days...  ;D
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Ok, December is close, so close the first release date is right about to be announced~

0X/12/09 - First Release (Release-Series Premiere)

What the X is standing for? You want to know? Guess!!!
The solution will be posted soon~ ;)

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:o :o

The upcoming UPDATE is sooooooooooooooooooooooo BIG!

And you are going to like it~ ;)
Promise here.

And the first update will have the first package of additional information, too.
IT WILL BE BIG!!!!

Prepare yourself, the release is planned for December, the 06th.

(Note: I'm not sure about the date - maybe it will be a lot earlier, but let's see~)

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OHOH:::

Could there be a surprise coming up very soon??
Could it be...

T... *killed for the second*

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Can't wait!

And congratulations on reaching 1000 posts. ;D
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akai-kun wrote:
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Chapter 5

The time for you to die has finally come…

BETTER The time has finally come for you to die.
(More clear , to least to me)

This will be your last day to live and play detective, Cool Kid.

Sentence is redundant. In the sentence above you already said die. Now you are saying Last day to live which is the same thing.

BETTER This will be your last day to play detective, Cool Kid.


Today, you will die, Conan Edogawa aka Shinichi Kudo!
Again repeating your self

BETTER add this: "Conan Edogawa aka Shinichi Kudo" to the top sentence.

A single person was sitting right in front of some monitors that were showing the crime scene, the National Theatre.

Wordly and unclear Right in front and in front are the same meaning remove right, some monitors the some is understood remove it 
ok next part is a time problem. The sentence suggest now but then you use the word were (past tense) and was. Showing is present tense

BETTER: A  single person sitting in front of monitors showing the crime scene, the National Theatre {more editing later }

The person was smoking and had a slight smile on the face which showed that it was not only a sentence said because of boringness but a sentence that is meant to be executed.

And it would be done today, he will die today!

------

National Theatre, 10:15h

Conan shrouded.

A little sense of fear has just reached him but he didn’t know what the reason could be.

Ignoring this matter, he continued concentrating on the case.

‘So, Kid, tell me, could this all be only a coincidence? I mean with the Porsche 356A and that he was a friend of your fathers’?'

Kid answered immediately.

‘No! The organization is behind all this for sure! There can’t be another explanation of this all.'

“But if…'

‘No ‘if’! This is the case and so there’s no need for thousands of ‘if’s, understand?'

Conan was worried about Kid. He did never see him like this.

‘Could it be that there’s another thing he is after and what he did not tell me about?'

But he did erase this thought out of his memory within a second.

‘Why do I even think about something like that? Kid is a good guy.'

Slowly, he nodded.

‘You’re right, Kid. No more.'

Kid gave Conan a thankful expression, then got back to the case.


------

Meanwhile, just three miles away from the National Theatre…

‘He is a risk factor. We have to get him out of the way if everything shall function as it should.'

The deep voice of a hidden figure spoke slowly and clearly.

‘Everything, I mean EVERYTHING, must go well. Is our spy in place?'

Another voice answered.

‘Yes, all is ready to start except the risk factor.'

‘Good.'

And after a short pause, the man continued.

‘Kill the risk factor and everyone connected to him!'

‘Yes, Sir.'

------

-to be continued!-


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Until next time,

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And as promised:

Here is the FIRST MULTIPLE RELEASE PACK!!!!!

Packed with three new chapters, first-time unrevealed additional information (pre-release script edition) and the next release date, this is a real happy day for you, enjoy~ ;)

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Chapter 6
Silence.
Everywhere.
Everywhere was silence.
A dark world with no material things – with just nothing at all.
Nothing.
A black, empty world with only him in it.
And the ultimate truth. The knowledge of his death.
Slowly he remembered. Very, very slowly…
‘Japan, Tokyo, the National Theatre…'
Many persons walking around him as he was still alive.
They were whispering.
Whispering and asking if he was dead.
There has been a low but sharp noise. A gun shot.
Black!
He looked confused. His head was hurting.
But wouldn’t that mean he’s still alive?
But he could only see an empty and completely black world.
With no one or nothing around.
He was certainly dead.
‘What is the truth?'
That was the question he wanted to solve years ago, months ago, days ago, minutes ago, seconds ago and even now.
The last question unsolved in his mind – in his life.
And Conan Edogawa tried to find an answer for it…


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Chapter 7
‘Is he dead?'
‘Yeah, think so.'
‘No, never!'

Voices speaking, wishing he wouldn’t be dead. Praising he wouldn’t be.
He could hear them but he knew the truth.
He knew that Conan Edogawa would never come back.
He had never missed any of his targets.
Never.

And this young kid would not be the first.
He did his job right. With a slight touch of drama and elegance. And all went perfect.
He just did another step impressing his bosses.
He killed a kid the first time and everything was okay.
No questions left that could have made his life and job difficult. No concerns at all.
It was a great feeling he felt in this very moment. An awesome one.

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Two blocks away, business was done as everywhere.

Men walking out of the front door, coming in for reports and work.
Everything was like every single day.

And within a crowd of people leaving the building, a young man did.
He was approximately 20 years old and looked like a nice and charming guy.
No one knew that this nice man was a killer who killed everyone if the payment is enough and secured.
His name was Daniel Basuhkiv.

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Chapter 8
Something white glimpsed out of an edge of what seemed like an entirely black world to him.
His feet were moving. Slowly.
He couldn’t walk properly at first but after some few steps, his legs were moving on themselves.
He was running towards the white shimmer and he came closer and closer…
The white spot was his only hope.

Hope.
A word he had entirely forgotten in the last moments.
A word that gave him energy.
Energy to raise himself up and find an answer for this all.
It was his duty.
And as he had reached the spot, he could see what was going on down there – next to his dead body.
And he could also see what happened miles away and what he saw there shocked him.

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Daniel Basuhkiv drove along the street. He felt happy.
A kind of happiness, other people would be hating or wanting to never have.
Then right in front of him, the lights turned red.
He stopped slowly and came to a stop right in time.
He sighed and sit back.
‘Guess, I’ll have to wait a little bit for getting my payment.'

Next to him, another car stopped.
The window was open and a woman with large blonde hairs looked at him, smiling.
‘Hey, sweetheart, ya know something?'
Basuhkiv blinked.
‘Ya know, I do everything if the payment is expensive enough. Like you, eh?'
He nodded.
He didn’t think why she could have known that.
He had only eyes for her sexy face.
The lights were going right to green every second.
But he didn’t notice.
And then, without hesitating, the woman shot at him…

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The bullet hit him in his chest. He didn’t feel pain, he felt something he couldn’t describe.
He had never imagined such a feeling.
Full of joy and tears. It was just like a little shudder as he saw blood dripping over his shirt.
His red blood was flowing down from one single hole in his chest.
He laughed.
He didn’t know why he laughed, but it was right. He felt it.
And with a last glance at the mysterious woman, his eyes closed and all that was left was his body and a smile on his face…

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The lights turned green and the woman drove away.
She was bored.
She didn’t know what exactly bored her but she would find out what.
No matter what.
Then behind her, two police cars and a black truck showed up.
The police cars were coming closer and closer, she wanted to drive faster but the engine made dreadful noises.
‘Ohoh…'
Then, without any warning, two of the police officers were shooting at her.
‘They’re shooting..? Why?'
The woman looked behind and…
‘Oh my god!'
Her eyes were widening of shock and fear.
‘Could it really be..?'
Her thoughts were interrupted as the black truck was right next to her car and the driver was shouting at her.
‘Come on! Jump on my truck; it’s your only chance. Will you take it?'
And she jumped.
It felt like minutes as she was flying through the air.
Behind her the shooting officers and her boss.
She couldn’t believe her eyes.
Her boss chasing after her and shooting at her together with police officers.
‘What in the name of hell has happened?'
Then, she crashed on the cargo area of the truck and the driver doubled the speed and after a few couple of moments, they were gone…
Gone…
She turned to the driver.
‘Hey there, you were right in time, thank you.'

‘Hello, Vermouth.'

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CHAPTER 6

So, this chapter is quiet like lyric. It was fun to write because the new style required doing that.
Why did I do that?
Well, I wanted to go deeper into the story and explore a new kind of a world which isn’t possible with just a normal Detective Conan – Story.
As the next chapters will show, there will be more of this kind because I think it’s pretty interesting how thoughts of people who are dead are and what do they feel like.
Also a fun part writing this chapter was writing the fact that Conan Edogawa is dead. And that in a story I want(ed) to be read along with the real one.
Funny thing there.

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CHAPTER 7

Yeah, I do remember searching for an idea to write this chapter.
And the one I got is in my opinion one of the best ideas I’ve ever got while writing.
I wanted to get a brand-new character into the story and I thought, ‘Well, if I already let Conan die, why don’t write about his murderer?', and this was the result.
And the new one, Daniel Basuhkiv is a great charcter and we will hear more of him later in the story, just a little hint/spoiler here (Why? – read the next information on the next chapter)~

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CHAPTER 8

Yeah, this is my favorite chapter until now.
It’s the longest one and the best, I would say.
There’s some action in it and some mystery, tragic and these things…
I really enjoyed writing that one and I think you did also reading it~
You may wonder who that boss is – well, it is the mysterious and unknown boss of the black organization!
And yes, he will return in some of the next upcoming chapters.
It’s a great try and project for me to get a story with a so-called ‘Red Line’ in it, a story you would never want to miss.
And I think that’s a great step in this direction…
Be prepared for more~ ;)

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NEXT MULTIPLE RELEASE IS SET FOR December, the 13th.

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heyyy  :o :o :o
these are the best chapters; I think! Very mysterious. Who is the boss? (I think I know who he is..) =))
Write more.. You are talented ! YOu have to use it..
Im a fan of your writing.. RESPECT
YOu describe the actions and all the themes very good.
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ShinRan36 wrote: heyyy  :o :o :o
these are the best chapters; I think! Very mysterious. Who is the boss? (I think I know who he is..) =))
Write more.. You are talented ! YOu have to use it..
Im a fan of your writing.. RESPECT
YOu describe the actions and all the themes very good.
Hey, thanks.
I'm really glad you liked it~
You think you know who the boss is? - Tell me your guess, please  :D
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