4869's DC novella

[4869]

Uploaded the complete and edited 1st chapter. Feel free to post your comments !

[Elika12]

It's great 4869
You have talent
you should be a writer

[4869]

It's great 4869
You have talent
you should be a writer

Hahah , thank you very much ))

[4869]

Finished the 2nd chapter.
I'll upload the PDF with it tomorrow.
Here's my deviantART page, you can read it there.

http://n-karakas.deviantart.com/

[Elika12]

*applauds 4869*
Bravo

[4869]

*applauds 4869*
Bravo

xD I really don't get why you think my work is great but THANK YOUU

[ShinRan36]

I really liked the second chapter.
You describe the situations,the thoughts and feelings of the characters very good.
Its excited that Conan will be Shinichi on his Birthday.

Spoiler:

(and meet ran maybe? please please please xDDD)

When I red "that person" I thought "WTF? THE BOSS IS IN THE SHIPP?"
But you meant Kaito so I understood :D.
KAITO rules .

Agasa looked at him in confusion but it was obvious that he was defending his reputation as a genius and didn't want to ask who Shinichi was talking about.
Eventually he gave up.

I had to laugh here xDD I can imagine this situation and his face when he doesnt understand something and cant admit it, in order to defend his reputation. xD. Poor Agasa.

A very good chapter.
When will the third chapter released?
Im waiting for you and for the next chapter (xDD).

[akai-kun]

WOW! 

Why the hell didn't I come looking in here the last days??
Your fanfiction is AWESOME!!!
(BTW: ShinRan36, great art for the cover page~)

First, about the title: It's really tempting. Great choice~ (Why don't I get such titles??^^)
Next, the story:

I love the idea of Conan growing up again to his alter ego Shinichi. Can't wait to read how this is developing the next chapters~
And then the idea of the cruise ship, just great! That's something not that often used within stories about Conan.

There's just something that I don't agree with, but I think that's just a typo:

Code: Select all

"Ai-kun…" the professor said, but THE Ai didn't reply.

I believe the 'the' in there is wrong here, or?

But back to your fanfiction.
The first chapter was most impressive and naturally the second also was.

One question from me here: Is Heiji Hattori also supposed to appear in your story?

With these chapters, I think, you've earned and will earn a lot of respect from writers and people in here~
Keep it up, that's awesome!

Can't wait for the next chapter(s)~ 

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BTW: It would be great if you could also read my fanfictions and post your thoughts about them. Thx in advance.

Spoiler:

So weit ich es mitgekriegt habe, bist du auch Deutsche/r. Also kurz mal in deutsch:

Deine Fanfiction ist absolute Spitzenklasse! Und das ist wirklich deine erste FF? Gratulation dazu!
Wie oben kurz gesagt, würde ich mich freuen, wenn du auch meine FFs lesen könntest und posten könntest, wie sie dir gefallen.
(Ein paar sind auf deutsch, ein paar auf englisch.)

Natürlich werde ich deine FF weiter lesen und (höchst wahrscheinlich) weiter vor Freude hüpfen^^ 

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OH, AND I will promote your Fanfiction in my ff thread and my signature~
(Because it's just awesome.)

[4869]

WOW! 

Why the hell didn't I come looking in here the last days??
Your fanfiction is AWESOME!!!
(BTW: ShinRan36, great art for the cover page~)

First, about the title: It's really tempting. Great choice~ (Why don't I get such titles??^^)
Next, the story:

I love the idea of Conan growing up again to his alter ego Shinichi. Can't wait to read how this is developing the next chapters~
And then the idea of the cruise ship, just great! That's something not that often used within stories about Conan.

There's just something that I don't agree with, but I think that's just a typo:

Code: Select all

"Ai-kun…" the professor said, but THE Ai didn't reply.

I believe the 'the' in there is wrong here, or?

But back to your fanfiction.
The first chapter was most impressive and naturally the second also was.

One question from me here: Is Heiji Hattori also supposed to appear in your story?

With these chapters, I think, you've earned and will earn a lot of respect from writers and people in here~
Keep it up, that's awesome!

Can't wait for the next chapter(s)~ 

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

BTW: It would be great if you could also read my fanfictions and post your thoughts about them. Thx in advance.

Spoiler:

So weit ich es mitgekriegt habe, bist du auch Deutsche/r. Also kurz mal in deutsch:

Deine Fanfiction ist absolute Spitzenklasse! Und das ist wirklich deine erste FF? Gratulation dazu!
Wie oben kurz gesagt, würde ich mich freuen, wenn du auch meine FFs lesen könntest und posten könntest, wie sie dir gefallen.
(Ein paar sind auf deutsch, ein paar auf englisch.)

Natürlich werde ich deine FF weiter lesen und (höchst wahrscheinlich) weiter vor Freude hüpfen^^ 

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

OH, AND I will promote your Fanfiction in my ff thread and my signature~
(Because it's just awesome.)

First of all a big THANK YOU!

I'm really glad that you liked it.

Regarding your question : Yes , Heiji Hattori will be there, but I am not saying how and where ...

Thank you very much for pointing out the typo !

I'm not German , i speak it quite well but my grammar sucks xD. Of course I will read your Fan Fictions, I heard from ShinRan36 that you're a great writer . Yes this is my first fan fiction , this is actually the first story I've written on English.

Thank you very much akai-kun for your review

Btw. I have the flu so I won't go to school that means more writing

[akai-kun]

WOW! 

Why the hell didn't I come looking in here the last days??
Your fanfiction is AWESOME!!!
(BTW: ShinRan36, great art for the cover page~)

First, about the title: It's really tempting. Great choice~ (Why don't I get such titles??^^)
Next, the story:

I love the idea of Conan growing up again to his alter ego Shinichi. Can't wait to read how this is developing the next chapters~
And then the idea of the cruise ship, just great! That's something not that often used within stories about Conan.

There's just something that I don't agree with, but I think that's just a typo:

Code: Select all

"Ai-kun…" the professor said, but THE Ai didn't reply.

I believe the 'the' in there is wrong here, or?

But back to your fanfiction.
The first chapter was most impressive and naturally the second also was.

One question from me here: Is Heiji Hattori also supposed to appear in your story?

With these chapters, I think, you've earned and will earn a lot of respect from writers and people in here~
Keep it up, that's awesome!

Can't wait for the next chapter(s)~ 

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

BTW: It would be great if you could also read my fanfictions and post your thoughts about them. Thx in advance.

Spoiler:

So weit ich es mitgekriegt habe, bist du auch Deutsche/r. Also kurz mal in deutsch:

Deine Fanfiction ist absolute Spitzenklasse! Und das ist wirklich deine erste FF? Gratulation dazu!
Wie oben kurz gesagt, würde ich mich freuen, wenn du auch meine FFs lesen könntest und posten könntest, wie sie dir gefallen.
(Ein paar sind auf deutsch, ein paar auf englisch.)

Natürlich werde ich deine FF weiter lesen und (höchst wahrscheinlich) weiter vor Freude hüpfen^^ 

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

OH, AND I will promote your Fanfiction in my ff thread and my signature~
(Because it's just awesome.)

First of all a big THANK YOU!

I'm really glad that you liked it.

Regarding your question : Yes , Heiji Hattori will be there, but I am not saying how and where ...

Thank you very much for pointing out the typo !

I'm not German , i speak it quite well but my grammar sucks xD. Of course I will read your Fan Fictions, I heard from ShinRan36 that you're a great writer . Yes this is my first fan fiction , this is actually the first story I've written on English.

Thank you very much akai-kun for your review

Btw. I have the flu so I won't go to school that means more writing

Yes, more writing~
Can't wait for the next chapters, thx.
Thx for reading my FFs, too.

[4869]

WOW! 

Why the hell didn't I come looking in here the last days??
Your fanfiction is AWESOME!!!
(BTW: ShinRan36, great art for the cover page~)

First, about the title: It's really tempting. Great choice~ (Why don't I get such titles??^^)
Next, the story:

I love the idea of Conan growing up again to his alter ego Shinichi. Can't wait to read how this is developing the next chapters~
And then the idea of the cruise ship, just great! That's something not that often used within stories about Conan.

There's just something that I don't agree with, but I think that's just a typo:

Code: Select all

"Ai-kun…" the professor said, but THE Ai didn't reply.

I believe the 'the' in there is wrong here, or?

But back to your fanfiction.
The first chapter was most impressive and naturally the second also was.

One question from me here: Is Heiji Hattori also supposed to appear in your story?

With these chapters, I think, you've earned and will earn a lot of respect from writers and people in here~
Keep it up, that's awesome!

Can't wait for the next chapter(s)~ 

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

BTW: It would be great if you could also read my fanfictions and post your thoughts about them. Thx in advance.

Spoiler:

So weit ich es mitgekriegt habe, bist du auch Deutsche/r. Also kurz mal in deutsch:

Deine Fanfiction ist absolute Spitzenklasse! Und das ist wirklich deine erste FF? Gratulation dazu!
Wie oben kurz gesagt, würde ich mich freuen, wenn du auch meine FFs lesen könntest und posten könntest, wie sie dir gefallen.
(Ein paar sind auf deutsch, ein paar auf englisch.)

Natürlich werde ich deine FF weiter lesen und (höchst wahrscheinlich) weiter vor Freude hüpfen^^ 

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

OH, AND I will promote your Fanfiction in my ff thread and my signature~
(Because it's just awesome.)

First of all a big THANK YOU!

I'm really glad that you liked it.

Regarding your question : Yes , Heiji Hattori will be there, but I am not saying how and where ...

Thank you very much for pointing out the typo !

I'm not German , i speak it quite well but my grammar sucks xD. Of course I will read your Fan Fictions, I heard from ShinRan36 that you're a great writer . Yes this is my first fan fiction , this is actually the first story I've written on English.

Thank you very much akai-kun for your review

Btw. I have the flu so I won't go to school that means more writing

Yes, more writing~
Can't wait for the next chapters, thx.
Thx for reading my FFs, too.

No problem I enjoyed the first 3 chapters I read today. You're even better than ShinRan36 said .

[4869]

I have now a fanfiction.net profile.

http://www.fanfiction.net/~karakasnedim

[CTU]

I finally had a chance to read chapter one. Great story so far. I have wanted to do a DC story myself after a DC dream (use what I remembered from the dream and finish it), but I am not that good of a writer to do it

[4869]

I finally had a chance to read chapter one. Great story so far. I have wanted to do a DC story myself after a DC dream (use what I remembered from the dream and finish it), but I am not that good of a writer to do it

Thank you very much for reading it , chapter 2 is published (links are in my signature) so if you have the time I would be really delighted to see your opinion on that one.

You should write it !
I think that I can't write worth a darn but I've receiving positive critics
I'm looking forward to see your story
 

[Beastly]

This is really cool. I want to see read the part where Kudo is taking Ran from Mouri haha. Your fanfic is really 100x better than mine.