Kaito Kid and the Great Detectives

Beastly · Post by **Beastly** » November 16th, 2009, 9:30 am

Sorry for grammar hehe. WHo cares about grammar anyways? hehehe

This is my first fanfic btw

Setting: Haido Hotel

The Great Detectives: The Preface of the battle

"This plan of mine will work against Kaito, it will prove that he us Kaito Kid." said Saguru Hakuba. Kaito Kid's next target is the Heart of the Kingdom Ruby. Here is the letter from Kid to the task force.

When you evolve something change,
When you think there's a change.
The time have change but you haven't.
If flying is not allowed in the air.
Where will i fly?
Behold as i take the Heart of the Kingdom Ruby

Kaito Kid

Saguru have the Heart of the Kingdom Ruby from his father, Kaito Kid is being challenged. Hakuba had a bet with Kaito. Saguru said " If Kaito Kid lost, you will not see Aoko for a week."

"Kaito Kid will win, of course" said Kaito If you lost then it will be the same consequence.

Meanwhile fan favorite Conan Edogawa also will participate in this action. On the Detective Mouri Agency Morui Kogorou is on his usual habit watching horse race and drinking beer. Suddenly in the midst of the game Kogoru had an invite to face with Kid which he accept. "That thief again, it will be easy" said Mouri

Let's fast forward after 15 mins. Kaito Kid meeting: There was Hakuba, Mouri, Heijji Hattori,.
Of course Mouri didn't let Conan to go in. He didnt have his transmitter with him. Then he saw Hakuba.

Hey Kid(referring to Conan), remember me from that time(The North-South-East-West detective case) said Hakuba. Looks like you cant go in because of that old man. I'll let you in because im the one who's the head of this one. I will not help you or that hard headed Detective. I just want to know who's the best detective here. Hey, who are you calling hard headed? Said Hejji. I'll give some basic infos for you all because it will unfair if i was the only one knew it and if i win with Kaito.

"He's not that arrogant" said Conan

Alright the jewel will be under a lazer protected, It's with barbed wire if you go from top. Of course im ready because he will asked for people for sure"

Here's the notice of Kid. Hakuba gives the notice. I will not give more of my plans as Kaito Kid might be here already.

So who might be Kaito Kid did he disguise already? Sorry for it the part 2-5 will be def better.

Beastly · Post by **Beastly** » December 21st, 2009, 9:00 am

The 3rd part is tomorrow or the day after tomorrow, since im going to another city.

Opinion and Suggestion and other thing

The Detective from North West: Kazuhi Ichiro

"That's all." Said Saguru. "What the heck, how did you expect us to catch KID if that's that only thing we know." said Heiji. "Oh you again nice to see you here that's enough even ask that glassed kid." said Hakuba "I g...." Conan but the Detective from NorthWest interrupts. "Of course i will definitely win this." That being alone is really too much to said Kazuhi Ichiro. "Oi Oi." said Conan.

"Heiji, i will not help you this time." Said Conan "I don....." said Heiji but Kazuhi Ichiro interrupts again. "What, is that kid helping you all the time aren't you the well known Hattori Heiji, i get it know your father is just making the fuss for you." Not like what you think said Heiji. "S*** you bastard" said Heiji angried at the detective.

OK let's do this Ku--- Conan, I will not help you! said Heiji. Who asked for you help anyways? said Conan on himself.

Short Chapter 2 it's basically about the introudction of Kazuhi Ichiro.

NEXT CONAN HINT:

Bullet

Beastly · Post by **Beastly** » December 21st, 2009, 10:00 am

Since i guess i have time i'll continue this.

Kaito Kid and the Great Detectives: decipher the code

Now after some nonsense fights the detectives are trying to decipher Kaito's code. "Heiji look at this there's something at the back of the note. Just use your common sense! tantei." said Conan to Heiji. "I knew it since earlier."

Meanwhile, the Detective Boys are watching TV.
"Here come Conan again being greedy to himself." said Genta
"Yea we are the Detective boys not the Conan tantei." said Ayumi
"Hey Professor Agasa take us to Haido Hotel." said Mitsuhiko

Ai just got the same normal face. Showing like no care in the world. *yawn* "I guess i have no choice" said Agasa

The Detective Boys went to Haido Hotel.

"Hey Conan-kun" said Ayumi. Huh? What the heck are they doing here? said Conan to himself *Conan look-around and saw Prof Agasa, Ai and the rest of Detective Boys. "Oi Oi" said to Agasa.
Heheheh *minor looking face on Agasa* "I got no choice." said Prof Agasa.

The Detective Boys look for Kid's notice and studied about it.
"Maybe Kaito Kid is coming from another planet, i heard from Kobayashi sensei that Earth rotate from Sun alot of times." Said Ayumi-chan

Kogoro Mouri "Uhh, i know it now. He said he will be evolve into a magical monster."

Kazuhi suddenly interrupts "I know it now." said Kazuhi. Heiji and Conan look at each other. As they look like that they decipher the first part of Kaito's riddle. "I decipher it a million years ago." said Hakuba.

"What the heck is this detective, i should have been watching the horse race right now." Said Mouri

Next Conan hint:

The Revolving Sushi

Who will win? Is Kaito disguised already?

Beastly · Post by **Beastly** » December 24th, 2009, 6:35 am

Chapter 3: Trapped

"I guess it now Kudo" said Heiji
"When he say evolve it was when the clock fully revolve as he say." said Heiji
"Yea" said Conan
"Hakuba, when did Kid sent the notice" said Conan
"7:30 PM and 15 tenths of a second" said Hakuba
"That's 15 minutes away from now" said Heiji
"All we can do now is look for Kid's disguise" said Conan
"I thought you guys won't help each other" said Ichiro
"Oi Oi" said Conan
"You baka you probably is eavesdropping in our conversation" said Heiji
"Hey Conan im stocked on here" said Genta
"Wait, i have a transmitter on uncle" said Conan
"Oh that's Kaito Kid probably" said Heiji *Conan and Heiji didnt think as it was 30 seconds before Kaito's heist
*Both run towards Mouri*
"Huh Huh Huh?" said Kogoro
*Then suddenly a smoke had appear*
"Baka, Kaito Kuroba there's a trap there" said Hakuba
"Im gonna grab KID" said Kazuhi
"So there are you Kid" said one of the organization member which named Tiger
"Damn How can i made some crucial mistake at this time" said Conan

How can Kaito outwit the 4 detectives and the Organization that killed his father? Read next chapter.

To be continued

Beastly · Post by **Beastly** » December 24th, 2009, 7:02 am

Chapter 5: heist

"Huh, how can i revenge for the one of the guy that killed my father and at the same time outwit this detectives" said Kaito to himself Kaito had some doubt on himself as he remember when he was almost killed by that organization

Then Kaito remembered what his father told him. Always keep your poker face. Then Kaito screamed Ladies and Gentlemen let's begin the show! Kaito put his hanglider and kept his mother make up then he took out all those lazer generated trapped in instant then Tiger shots Kaito then Kaito act that he was really hurt . Then the 4 detectives look at Tiger. Except Hakuba who really want to reveal that Kaito Kuroba is the Phantom Thief Kid. Then Hakuba jumped into the rope that was specially modified and slammed into Kaito. Kaito almost fell from the barb wire that Hakuba set.

Then the 3 detectives had a cat and mouse game with Tiger. "Uncle pls call the police" said Conan. Then Kaito took the Heart of the Kingdom ruby. As he goes out Conan, Heiji, Kazuhi and Hakuba tried to follows him. Hakuba didnt put some trap on the air as Kaito said on his notice that he's not going to fly. Feeling cheated Hakuba and the 3 detectives got another notice. Detective Boys,Mouri and the 4 detectives left there eye for Tiger and he suddenly disapear

I'm going to take the Magical Ruby tommorow
Be there and join me in my show
Especially the guys that owed me a lot from the past
Phantom Thief Kid

"I'm going to get my revenge" said Conan
"Didn't know that thief is that intelligent" said Kazuhi

To be continued

Next Conan hint:
The past

Decided to expand this hahaha

Beastly · Post by **Beastly** » December 24th, 2009, 7:53 am

Will have a remastered version.

akai-kun · Post by **akai-kun** » December 24th, 2009, 11:39 am

Wow, seems like I'm the first here to comment.

You've got a great basic idea for your story - the (so) far I can see.
I like the idea, it's great~

But with to your grammar.
It is not the best, sorry.

(Mine's not, too.)

An edited version? Seems like a great deal for me.

Can't wait for the next updates~

Keep it up~

4869 · Post by **4869** » December 24th, 2009, 11:50 am

akai-kun wrote: Wow, seems like I'm the first here to comment.

You've got a great basic idea for your story - the (so) far I can see.
I like the idea, it's great~

But with to your grammar.
It is not the best, sorry. (Mine's not, too.)

An edited version? Seems like a great deal for me.

Can't wait for the next updates~
Keep it up~

I agree akai-kun , grammar is very important!
Like you said the overall idea is great, but the realization because of the grammar isn't.
I really hope that he will correct his mistakes in the edited version.

karisama · Post by **karisama** » December 25th, 2009, 2:37 pm

The story could be improved a lot if the grammar was corrected. Do you need help? c:

Beastly · Post by **Beastly** » December 27th, 2009, 10:51 pm

Im currently in our province. Going home tomorrow. The remastered chapter 1 and 2 will also be tom. Yeah if you want to help why not?